It's really nice! I like the way you change the pov right away after Nami seems to realize her feeling. It's really interesting when you didn't jump the gun into like 'making out' right away, but slowly introducing that 'hey the relationship between the two is slowly changing' It super interesting! Thank you so much for writing it!

That was really subtle and cute. I won't lie that it felt a bit cheesy at parts; the usage of wind and sails. However, in context, it fits beautifully. I really appreciate this acknowledgement they have that doesn't need to be super physical or super outwardly emotional. It was great!

Awesome! Your story is the best I've read so far! Zoro and Nami were so in character. I even laughed at the part about cutting the sandwich with his swords, your really good at writing! Please write a sequel to this!

So cute! :) I really like how you write! And I love how you portray the characters!

I loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!
Your story is super sweet! :3 ··· Is the first time I read a ZoNa fic and I must say that is super romantic point of view that you raised me in history!
Keep it up!
PD: And forgive my bad grammar, I just do not know much English xp

Aww, so sweet :)

aaahh! I love this!

I really love the last part and the symbolic meaning with the wind :) it's very sweet

So good to have another ZoNa writer! Good work! Hope to read more fics soon :)

woaahhhhh sweettttt...
i lovee zoro namii

so cute, I love a lot like you wrote this story is so romantic and the way the two of them interact is so cute luck with your upcoming works, hugs :).

Greetings and Kisses * 3 *

See you later :)

PS: By the way, you're a great writer , now you're on my list of favorite writers, I love you :).