OMG that was an amazing story. I had butterflies in my stomach, just waiting for them to get caught! lol

I can't believe the story has ended, but I can't wait for the sequel. Hopefully you'll have the sequel up soon.

I LOVED IT! AWESOME CANT WAIT FOR SEQUEL!

great chapter; u should really consider finishing Evanescing Apparitions

cute and i thought u mightve listened to me...ah wut the hell, it was a farewell, i get it, all right, bye bye, hope to see u back soon.

OMG SO GOOD. you had me all scared with them breaking up. awesome ending and i cant wait for the sequel. Will amanda and harry be in it as much as this one, i love reading about them.

no offense, but this chap was kind of pointless, i thought u were done and working on a spin-off...

i went back to look at the posts and i do seem like a psycho so maybe that butchers knife WILL come in handy, YAY! read ur site, its kinda weird and melodramatic, but...okay. so, i was gonna say somethin...lets think...o yea! i want to read ur other stories, post them in miscelaneous...(i write about celebs too, my sis thinks im nuts...) oh barbies pamela, i thought she was britney...hes married now so, i guess its even more weird now. sorry, this has nothin to do with this story but i dont email/give my email address so this is what i got...

Spain, i love it. no wonder u love my posts, im the only one who fuckin posts, no one has love for bp anymore? lol...ok, so, they shouldnt end up together but im not gonna bust on ur ass on it...she should be with someone else...**cough** kyle **cough** ok, so this story was fun! sniffle, sniffle...kiss kiss, hug hug...okay, so ill read the sequels even tho i should be mean and grill ur ass for DIRECTLY disrespectin me...lol, dont worry, but dont give me ur address cuz then, u might see a teenager with a butchers knife in ur window...

Hey your story is really really good, i hope you update soon :)

Great last 2 chapters. I love em. Keep it up!

Awesome chapter!

im like the only one to review so it looks like im stalking ur story...um...so, heres the story. they dont love each other. scratch that they arent compatible. u understand that u cant have them like get married and grow old together. my suggestion: amanda's pregnant and harry thinks they should get married because its the 'right thing to do.' amanda is one of those people who doesnt believe in getting married if its not for love and realizes that harry just suggested getting married. she realizes shes eighteen and if hes even able to consider getting married all ready, he cares about her more than she cares about him. shes not ready to be the partridge family. shes got some 'wild oats to sow.' so, they break up. (and dont make her get together with marty maybe she shouoldnt get married like ever, maybe she'll be one of those forty year olds with a twenty two year old kid (boy?) whos sleeping with her kids best friend. just an idea if u dont like it, scratch it. this chap was cool.

thats cute...she should be pregnant. thatd make a great storyline and would lead to a great spin off.

its fabulous...such a guilty pleasure! i dont want it to end! yeah, u made ronnie a bitch even more so than usual but u know wut? its obvious u dont like her and you are thebig writer in charge. and lauren is even being a little bitchy and shes cool so stay a little more clear of that. i DONT WANT GRADUATION TO COME! i like the sneaking its the fun. these two would never survive without the tension of trying not to get caught...maybe theyll break up afterward...cant wait for your sequels! u almost stuck around for your aniversary: stand up and take a bow!