Reviews for Abandon |
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Guest chapter 4 . 3/19/2018 only ~2000 words of actual story, a good idea in premise but wow just a time waste... |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/19/2018 I just love how 3/4 of this chapter is thanking people who favourited the story, I also love the formatting errors you couldn't be bothered to fix |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/15/2016 PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/10/2016 so short. please make it longer |
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 4 . 10/6/2015 Then when are you gonna redo please don't take too long this time I hope the next one shows how they face tsuna's ex family with his new one and make them regret what they did and of course that tsuna won't forgive them |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2015 Update plz |
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 3 . 12/30/2014 Please you have to update and continue this wonderful fanfic I just love it I just wish it would be a little longer is too good |
Marshmallow chapter 3 . 12/3/2014 The story and plot is very interesting. I personally think you should have more detail instead of dialogue. And also, the story seems to be moving to quick, as well as a quite ooc Tsuna. |
Takatou chapter 3 . 12/2/2014 Yayyy! Another chapter! After hearing what you said about Iemitu my hatred toward him grown. I hated that type of parent that like to choose to only loved one of his kid. Oh, so that what happen with the kid? They're Estraneo experiments. Then, what about Mukuro, Ken, and Chikusa? They're also Estraneo experiments right? or are they with the other Estraneo's boss? does that mean they will be safe faster this time? Will Tsuna meet his other guardian -the real one, as in the canon-, I just hoped that they didn't become his younger sister guardian. Actually, I want them to hate Tsuna's family for abandoning him. And, yup, it will be awesome if he has that much flame. I want Tsuna to grow stronger fast. And show his family, how strong he is. I can't wait for more, please update soon. XD |
Natsuyuuki chapter 3 . 12/1/2014 hmm... interesting actually... well , Please Update Soon and Good Luck! |
CieloTsukari chapter 3 . 12/1/2014 WTH? Sorry, but I don't understand a thing here. |
thor94 chapter 3 . 12/1/2014 interesting chapter. most of student where abandonned to estraneos. can't wait next |
Aizen Hikari 99 chapter 3 . 12/1/2014 as always..the story is super good keep working hard :D |
Aizen Hikari 99 chapter 2 . 11/29/2014 wow such a good story...i want more oh btw good job :D |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/2/2014 wow! This story is starting to get interesting! Hope you keep up the great work! |