Reviews for Second Chance's
Goten Askil chapter 3 . 7/18
Why the hell doesn't Jeremiah use his Geass on Nunnally to erase Charles' forced blindness? Even if Lelouch doesn't want to bring back her memories for whatever reason, does he want his sister to remain blind?
notsofrilly chapter 5 . 7/2
Just want to say that I love how you sped through half of season one. I find that in most time travel fics only minute changes are made to cannon in order to not change the timeline too much. Therefore why go through cannon in detail. Just say what you plan to change and that's it.

I am sad that we don't see much of CC. I hope to see more of her in the future.

I would also like to see Shirley's reaction to Kallen. I assume because we fast forward through the story, her reaction isn't really important.

I hope Lelouch takes care of Nina soon. FLEIJA is a powerful weapon.

What happened to Suzaku? Weren't they going to make him remember after the Kawaguchi incident?
notsofrilly chapter 3 . 7/2
Kallen Geass sounds alot like Rai's. The only problem I have with it is that the phrase is too limiting. The biggest drawback of Geass is I feel when it fully matures thus can't be turned off. Lelouch saw this with Euphie, Mao went crazy, and CC with everyone loving so she couldn't see what they really felt (I'm sure some people under her control tried to rape her - you know obsessive love). The only person we know of that wasn't harmed by a mature Geass is Charles and that's due to him having a "perfect" geass that he can turn on and off even at its mature state (although it's weaker).

Anyway, Kallen and Sayoko have this phrase that helps them control their Geass. That doesn't make sense. It should only work when they activate it. At the beginning stage their Geass is not always on so they don't need that phrase. Then when the Geass is semi-mature, it would build tension.

The Power of Kings is not limited. It is absolute power. Absolute Obedience, Absolute Sound (Mao), Absolute Suspension (Rolo) to name a few. To have Kallen and Sayoko Geass be limited by a phrase goes against the very power of geass.

I also want to talk about Jeremiah. His Geass Canceller geass may also go out of control one day. I suggest that you make Jeremiah geass "perfect". This because if his Geass is always active, then he would be able to be near Lelouch all the time because that would mess with Lelouch's geass. He wouldn't be able to walk through a building without fearing that one of Lelouch mindslaves would be freed due to his presence. It would be better if he can turn it on and off like Charles can or have it directed through the eyes. Or you could regulate him to be Nunnally bodyguard.
notsofrilly chapter 1 . 7/2
Honestly my biggest fear with these time travel fics is Mao. He can ruin everything. His power is too OP against Lelouch. It's that one trick that can't be repeated that does him in. So Jeremiah geass is a big help to that. And this way Jeremiah doesn't need to get experimented on to get the Geass Canceller
HowLife chapter 8 . 6/17
Note, Brittanians originate from late 1700s brittian, which had ceylon as well as their renowned taste for tea, as well as the infamous British sweet tooth
Lux Sumomo chapter 12 . 4/28
I like how the characters are regrouped (e.g. Nunnally with Rolo, Cornelia being elder sister-in-law to Kallen, etc.). Hopefully you will find the time and motivation to continue this story again soon
Rina Eve chapter 1 . 6/5/2019
Please will you continue this story? This story is great I've been waiting for you to update this story for years since you that A/N that's supposed to be chapter 12
hnh058513 chapter 4 . 10/16/2018
Is he remembering to plan for Mao, Has he planned for Nunnally's abduction by V.V., also nice choice with gun training considering how he was beaten by suzaku at the end of R1
hnh058513 chapter 3 . 10/16/2018
So she has a variant of Rai's
TwinkLevhann chapter 12 . 7/8/2018
pleaseeeee update
Germanygsg91 chapter 12 . 1/5/2018
hope you continue this soon
Manzana835 chapter 12 . 4/17/2017
Hello.
I don't know if you are going to continue this story, but I would be really happy if you do, this story is really something and it would be a shame if it stoped just like that.
Anyway, I hope you continue to write more amazing stories like this an do what makes you happy.
Bye bye
Dragonheart Of Ireland chapter 12 . 10/6/2016
Awesome story!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/6/2016
Tis a well written time travel fic so refreshingly unlike many others. Unfortunately, you've put this on hold, but I hope you'll one day come back to it.
Snappy Flowah chapter 2 . 2/27/2016
waaaaaaaaaaa... really awesome great epic super story! I'm sooooooooooo exited really waaaaaaaaa!
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