Pretty fun read overall. If I had to pick out one major flaw, it's that you tend to lean too much on existing gags from the DF (parkour, paranoia, etc). It definitely becomes less of an issue later on, and you absolutely make up for it with how you handle the feeling of barely scraping by in an unfamiliar and hostile world. Just something to point out, especially considering the original gags you came up with (like Dresden's butchering of the german language and forays into flight) were top notch.

i really hope you update this man its been awhile and really wanted to see where this went

I am THOROUGHLY disappointed in myself for not seeing the Gloryhammer reference coming

bows are for the strongest people not for the weak

use the benefit to sacrifice the godhand take their power

Wow, Harry has some really bad luck in bizarro-world, doesn't he? I'm really glad things seem to be looking up for him in this chapter. :D I love the byplay between him and Toot - also Toot's handy new powers. ;) I wish you the very best of luck on your writing.

Don't know about improved technic, didn't noticed much difference. Story is good.

Been looking forward for a new chapter. This was a good one

This pleases us.
So where do they go from here? I doubt they'd head for the elflands considering the hell Guts and co had to go through but staying near falconia is suicide.

Loved it, though there were many places that you either misspelled a word or used a wrong one that I felt broke the flow. That's understandable though as they were more than likely just typos or spell check just trolling you.

You Maniacs! You blew it up!

Nice work, Harry.

Delays are par for the course in fanfiction. Even abandons are par for the course. Just look at Miura; it took him three times as long to get from where you left off to the end of this chapter. lol

Whoop! Another fun read, and I liked how in awe Rickert was of Harry's firestorm... and Harry's appreciation of Rickert's proto-rocket launcher. Also, Harry is gonna be ticked next chapter about Toot having healing abilities all this time. Just his luck eh?

Also, looking forward to seeing how Harry handles having traveling companions now. He won't be able to blaze across the countryside as a wolf anymore, and he'll have to worry about his companions during the nightly attacks.

I KNEW YOU'D COME BACK! ::Discreetly shreds eulogy behind back::

It looks like we're finally about to get that long-awaited team-up. I was worried Harry was going to follow Guts and company via glac- I mean, boat.

I was a bit disappointed Harry went all the way to Falconia and did not mean Griffith, then again, considering the nature of Harry's powers, he basically dodged a bullet.

Looking forward to Harry in Elfhelm, aka "More F***ing Fae"

Can't wait for Harry and guts to meet