Beautiful, thank you.

Beautiful! Simply stunning!

I definitely see this as something that could've (SHOULD'VE!) happened in the Manga. The characterization for each was spot on. PERFECTION!
This is the first fic of yours that I have read and I hope the rest are just as good. Again, great job, this is one beautiful one shot.

AWWWW I'M CRYING!

Wow! I know it's not how it happened but I swear that piece SHOULD have been the canon. Beautifully written, you know the characters almost perfectly, its just amazing. I await the day you write more.

Enjoyable and sweet.

I really enjoyed it.

*slow clap*
Great drabble. Nearly felt like it could be in the show

Hey, I decided to take a look around some more of your fics once more, and I have to say, I fell in love with this short, sweet oneshot. It's absolutely lovely; I wouldn't make it any longer or shorter. :) It's a beautiful piece of work, totally in sync with the original characters and setting, and I really marvel at how you managed to bring out Sasuke's and Sakura's emotions and personalities so well. I am amazed at your level of writing once again, and hope you will continue your incredible narration in Quietus, too :)

Ja ne!
EbonyEye

awww. this is so sweet..

Loved it! No words. I hope the real ending is similar to this.

This was absolutely beautiful. And ties with the art so well. Fantastic job.

I love this so much! How awesome would it be if this would become canon to the manga? Like all the sasusaku fans would be rewarded for all the drama and heartaches Kishi put us through.

awwwwwwwww 3

this would be a great multi chapter BRAVO i love it!

...Wish something like this would happen in the manga as well...