1. *clapping* bravo brilliant spectacular
2. you really know how to write a sex scene author-sama
3. ISTG this should of been put as angst

*also faints*

hold on bitch hold on bitch what-

Momo was like, "WHY DONTCHA ACTUALLY LEARN SOMETHING YOU LITTLE BITCH! DONT TALK TO MY SON UNTIL YOU LEARN THE DEFINITION OF '用t楼bぇ染日tch'!

Jiraiya is gay for Minato. Minato is gay for his own fucking biological son? WTF?

Why is almost every male dude gay?

Hmmm can't tell if I like the story or not... but I'll favorite it anyway!

I love this story it always puts me on a good mood and I can just relax and let myself fall into the story.

a line in this me reminded me of that song with a line that goes lalalalala California I forgot its not

holy shit minato what happened

I think the story has been progressing nicely. We could have seen a more gradual dismissal of naruto, like over time his parents started to treat him like so rather than treating him like shit from the get go. You jump the gun quite often, like how the fuck they concluded a fucking ghost or her identity so easily or the book that is super convinent in describing why naruto was the way he was. I think the book and discovery of naruto's power, again, should have been gradual, like a butterfly leads him to the library and after reading many texts they realize what magic is, and they make their own deductions such as naruto's condition at birth rather than be given the info so easily. Same with the ghost. Again, other than these instances I find no fault in your writing (characterizarion doesn't count as its a preference plus characters are the bitchiest bitch to write)

So I’ve loved this so far but you have absolutely shatter my mind with on simple thing you kept using the word “emancipated” for a bit I was like okay the definition in my head don’t make sense with how you’re using it but okay people make mistakes then got to the point where you used it 3 or so times in a row and I was like fuck this imma look this up and rip this guy a new one over this but you were rightful in your use of the word. For the longest time I alway thought of emancipated as the same as Emaciated which I did not know was a word Alway thought if you were emancipated you basically skin and bones so thank you for teaching me the correct use of the word

wow I thought it was Naruto who died, any so I was shocked when he wasn't, wow

I gotta admit... the lemon scenes were really hot. Lol. Thanks for the story ;)

That was mean so mean. I wish that I’d known but thanks for not doing that. I love love love love love love this.