| Reviews for The Affliction of War |
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Prince Launiuvao chapter 1 . 7/4 A6 q 1kega: |
ixSorA chapter 27 . 6/30 I don't know how I should react to George wether to hate him or pity him. It obvious that without Fred he feels alone... But does he really have to go that mad. The dead stays dead no matter what you do |
SandyDunes chapter 28 . 6/19 This story certainly carries a lot of luggage. It reminds me of real life. haha... I had fun reading it though, I was reeling from how different all the characters were. But they weren't bad. They seemed human. I thought Natasha and Bruce would hit it off. Then we have Clint cheating. Also Neville dying. Loki being a creep. Tony honestly should be locked up if he takes it too far. Black Widow more bitter than ground cocoa beans. Bruce disappearing most of the way. The lack of use in logical magical spells. Invisibility Cloaks forgotten. Loki not using any tricks of his. The plot is weird and there seems to be no good person except Steve. So, honestly, you're very good in writing slice of life stories. And the talks with Steve and their intimate bonding were all ironically put, sweet. The characters were all very broken, its very captivating. Its messy and I love it. |
Qtsarahanne chapter 27 . 11/18/2019 Wonderful story thank you for writing it! |
Wolvie26 chapter 27 . 10/16/2019 Love it! |
gleefanforever09 chapter 27 . 10/4/2019 love it please write more |
LittleCrybaby13 chapter 3 . 6/15/2019 i can't believe how much of a flirt harry is. it's hilarious and cringy at the same time |
CureCaligraphy chapter 1 . 4/10/2019 Well now. I do believe I found my first Team Captain America fan fiction. Intriguing... |
Matt chapter 3 . 2/16/2019 "Back when she had been his beau" Nope - a beau is a male romantic interest. Steve was Peggy's beau, she was his belle. |
Jasmine Julia Soleo Bias chapter 19 . 10/10/2018 Neville... ... |
Jasmine Julia Soleo Bias chapter 3 . 10/10/2018 huwahahahaha go harry! |
sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 18 . 9/7/2018 love it so far, just a note though, it's Minister of Magic, not for magic |
mayawene chapter 27 . 8/17/2018 thanks |
Foxy-Floof chapter 15 . 8/2/2018 Stupid fucking Harry Potter. THERAPY, DAMN YOU! This story really gets a rise out of me. Once he knew he was pregnant, he had a DUTY to see to his own health and well-being. If he didn't want to take care of himself and a baby, then he should have ended his pregnancy then and there. That kind of shit pisses me OFF royally. Good job on this story, by the way. It's really got me hooked. |
Duo-Harmony-in-the-Dark chapter 3 . 4/29/2018 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! ;D So loving this! |