I love how you portrait torrhen and how you gave her a name that is meant for men! Torrhen is a strong woman who is handle to defend herself and I really love how you portrait her conflicting emotions! And I really love how she lied about the attack and isn't so wrapped around jaime's little finger just because he is handsome. It almost felt so real! Anyways, I know it has been at least two years since you last updated this book but I really wish you find the inspiration again and update it! I really want to read more of it! It's one of the best fanfiction I have read being a fanfic Junkie. It really inspires me to write my own fanfiction! Thank you so much for writing this masterpiece!

Love this. Please continue.

Honestly I hate Sansa and Torrhen is being weak

Torrhen if you're going to marry Jaime Lannister, it's time to clarify that the games are over; You know he prefers you to die to be free from marriage. You just have to clarify that you think the same of him, you can not stand having to marry a miserable man; that is capable of letting men try to rape and kill her.
In other words for you, it is the same as King Aerys and as such you will treat it; you will not respect him because he has earned your contempt. Let him go with his sister, who is better without him; If you are ready Torrhen you should tell King Robert what Jaime allowed in order to break the engagement.
It would be fun to see the fear in Jaime and in the queen, when the king breaks out in anger because his fiancé let some men attack her; It would be a good revenge for Lady's death.

Why do we need yet another character? Particularly as it doesn't make sense to have a 'twin sister who marries the Kingslayer'.

Torrhenboys name

You should actually give your OC a female name.

Taking a coding class or something like that? hahahahaha

codes

Great story! I love how Torrhen has both of Sansa and Arya in her and I love how finally someone made an OC who doesn't hate Sansa and doesn't constantly side with Arya. Mostly, I like the way she takes care of her younger siblings and how she comforted Arya. I also like how she IS. How she's just her own personnot too difficult and not too easy. In a way, I see her as the older responsibile sister, Sansa as the spoilt naive middle sister and Arya as the careless little sister who looks up to the oldest sister. I can't wait to read more! Please, update as soon as possible!

More!

[Lord Eddard is to become Hand of the King, Sansa Stark is to marry the king's eldest son - Prince Joffery, and Torrhen herself is asked to marry the infamous kingslaying Jaime Lannister.]

A few things I noticed while reading this:

Why isn't Torrhen betrothed to Tommen? Is it because of the age difference (though that's doubtful as canon shows betrothals have a very wide range of age differences, with the only requirement being that the woman is of age before the marriage is actually consummated)?

Why is Torrhen engaged to marry Jaime when the Kingsguard are permitted never to marry nor take wives?

Reading further, I'm not sure why Torrhen isn't really just Arya. She basically acts like her to the point that she reads like an older version of Arya had she been a tiny less hotblooded.

Great story. Looking forward to when things start happening. Please update soon.

Just finished chapter 3... Just starting chapter 4... You have an amazing gift for words! And what a way to leave us drooling for more...

Hope you update soon! I really enjoy this story! ;)