| Reviews for A Trip in Time |
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  Brenden chapter 2 . 2/11/2016 Goodwork |
 AngelShep chapter 2 . 3/17/2015 It started quite nicely ! I want to know what'll happen next. You write really well and it's easy to follow and read. The characters are IC which is really great ! I hope you update one day ! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/15/2015 you know if this is only going to be 5 chapters you should let someone adopt it i honestly thinks it has so much potential. anyways uh good job love it |
| hurry upupdate chapter 2 . 11/19/2014 :-) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/9/2014 What fun! Not to mention funny. And short fic is more than fine! :) |
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 11/3/2014 Credentials established with the military, at least partially, and story going strong. Going to be awkward when they learn Tony is Howard's son though, because no one there (i.e. named character and actually important to the story) seems like someone who would approve of Howard being a negligent father. Interested by the "Aunt Peggy" comment though |
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 Tony's always so sarcastic. It's hilarious. And Loki, trying to match Tony's humor, their interaction made me laugh. |
| Queen Martha Pond chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 You've captured Tony and Loki's wit beautifully! I can't wait for more! |
| FatesShadow83 chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 Lovely! |
| ultima-owner chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 Love the witty comments |
| C. S. Stars chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 Lol. Love the witty banter. Uh. Really Stark? You're supposed to be a genius! And you just changed a big thing! |
| Leviticus Wilkes chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 Allow me to begin... First off, the banter is fun. Loki's little quips are humorous across the board, as is Tony Snark (yeah yeah, bottom of the barrel). Good call with the future expectations, it's good to see Erskine/Reinstine still alive. And finally, the denotation that the army wouldn't let him get away so easily. Cute As for the negatives... well... I would have liked to see more interaction between everyone without Tony. Even just some whispering between each other. And really, I would have just liked to see more of everything. I understand you're schedule is crammed, but a little more would have been nice. But it kept me engaged, kept me entertained, and was overall well written. Not bad. |
| rioludoodle chapter 2 . 10/31/2014 This is really some wonderful writing. :) And the idea is something I haven't seen before. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Chapter seems a bit short, but that's my only complaint. Keep writing! :) |
| LoverShadowGirl chapter 1 . 10/24/2014 Dude, keep this up! |
| mndstjohn chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 Looks funny! |
