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derek chapter 1 . 8/8/2019 raven hissing saying to garfield care to explain why my green annoyance idÃot boyfriend is biting my arm as a green dog |
derek chapter 1 . 8/8/2019 lol raven saying to garfield we can play truth or dare |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2018 Great! |
Lord Sicarius chapter 1 . 5/1/2016 Wow. Easily one of your best works Jack |
DoomedToBeACrazyFanGirlForever chapter 1 . 3/13/2015 huftpiwurhnrlbhjref uksj AWWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SO SWEET GOODNESS JACK YOU NEED TO STOP 3 udzkfbhvj |
HunterMoore chapter 1 . 1/8/2015 Great story, loved Raven in this. The 'oh' moment when she realised why he wanted her attention was really well done. |
Dahkoro5050 chapter 1 . 10/28/2014 Shadowgawkers, eh? It'll work, and while we don't exactly gawk (anxiously await in withdrawal in between posts is probably more accurate) the term fits well enough. |
BurntTitan chapter 1 . 10/20/2014 humorouse (full of humor?) with cliff hanging romance at the end. Ausome! to get all this from a picture takes a great writer. A picture is worth a 1000 (1854) words! |
RavenSerendipity chapter 1 . 10/17/2014 Cool! I am now a shadowgawker! This oneshot was great. I don't think I'm ever going to be able to leave a review saying otherwise, and for that I am glad. :) |
MrRayney chapter 1 . 10/16/2014 I really adore this story, was too cute and the ending was great. |
My Yellow Dragon chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 FOR THE WIN! Yes |
berribitch chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 Aw that was so cute. And not just bb and rae. Like all of it. The whole family thing too. And I mean that with his parents and his newfound family, the titans. So cute. I'm done. Yeah, so even though I thought this was the cutest thing out there, I feel like this writing isnt up to par with your usual standards. It felt a bit choppy and awkward. The characterizations were also a bit off in my opinion. (I do like the explanation for Beast boy's childish behaviors though.) Another thing, the first part of this story seemed forced. Like, again, the characterizations, but also the fact that with the plot it seemed pointless. The point is bb wants even to play a game. But that happens all the time, so why does it have to be his birthday? But with the birthday thing, I'm sort of glad you added it because, well, it was cute. It showed that they all care and so forth. You know. All that sentimental friendship/family stuff. (I adore that stuff.) So yeah. I still think this was great though, don't get me wrong. I just find it easier to say what I don't like rather than what I do like (for any story. Not just yours.) cuz really, I love it. Idk maybe I was just expecting different. It was still great though. Unexpected things. Also, I learned how to play Slap. -LtD |
liketotescray chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 Why is everything you write so freaking adorable? Oh my god I can't even... ugh! I literally teared up. You made me cry. This was absolutely precious, I don't even have words lol |
MusicRocks807 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 Aww, this was so cute! My eyes were actually watering when Robin and Raven gave him the picture and the rings... And, of course, the team's general acceptance of his occasional childish antics. Really showcases the family bond they have, so well done. I liked the little bit at the end too, and the scene where puppy!Beast Boy was clinging onto her :') |
Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 This was a cute/sweet/adorable (you get the idea) fic. I also liked how sharp Raven was, I for one didn't even think Beast Boy had a motive for wanting to play snap. Just shows I still have things to learn. Thanks for the update. It's highly appreciated. |