I like it, I imagine May's family won't be happy when May tells them about how Brendan was treating her.

Great job!

Solidad seems like a saint. That was so sweet.
No, but it sounded familiar.

This was amazing. I think we all are grateful to Soledad. :p

omg that's from flipped! AHH I haven't read that book in so long but I have that quote written down with all my other fave quotes aw

I thought this whole thing was absolutely adorable honestly. Sometimes I feel so bad for Brendan, he's always portrayed as the bad guy aw but I really like this story and Drew was so in character but still flirty woohoo

the only thing that got me was that the end was a bit rushed, like if someone's just gotten out of an abusive relationship, just left someone at the alter, she's not going to want to be romantic right afterwards, like she's bound to be a little emotionally unstable (but then again, I've never left someone at the altar so I guess I don't know what would happen hahaha)

But yeah fab work and keep it up!
Zae

How surprised was I to find a quote from one of my all time favorite books, Flipped? Tht quote has always stuck out to me and I'm so glad it has touched someone else. Keep writing, this one-shot was beautiful

Awwwww, cute!

No, I didn't recognize the book quote, but, I dare say, I saw "For the first time in forever."

This was amazing! I loved it! All the drama, May being an escaped bribe awesome! This was so cute and Solidad and Drew were super funny! XD ANICA OUT LATESSSSSS!

Totally agreeing with Drew and Solidad here... I'll kill him. e_e

I was so worried for May, but I really love her friends. I was on the edge of my seat plenty of times. I'm afraid I don't recognize the quote (or the book) but I think it's really cool how you implemented it into your fanfic! Nice work.

Awwwwwwww! May, why did you even go with Brendan in the first place? :) Love this oneshot!