Magnificent! Loved the ending! I could feel her terror and you made Gaston positivity prime evil!

Very interesting for such a short story I do love it so yeah _

Loved it!

I love reading your story! It always makes me feel fully immersed in their world. I've read it several times now and it's just as good each time!

Very different, but also very enjoyable.

Wow really enjoyed this story
It was fantastic really enjoyed reading it
Felt a tinge of no not again when Gaston died being a Gaston fangirl but he had it coming and deserved it.
Expected her to be brainwashed and start loving him for a moment so lots of unexpected twists and suprises for me
Also love how lefou shot Gaston was a very good twist
Really good story

I wished you did an epilogue about life after the wedding you know but still a really good story!
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That progressed and end quickly...wow!
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Omg Gaston u butthead! Well how did he get out? He's probably cucuckoo lol yes I spelled it wrong to emphasize crazy lol!
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Oh lawrt wth?! Belle just flew out of the cuckoo cuckoo nest with Gaston lol! Her body couldn't take it but hopefully the beast hid in the shadow and return for her when Gaston was gone...or is that too soon?
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Give it to Gaston! Kill the monster! Gaston had finally flew the coop! Mind and all lol! This is only chapter 3!
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So close but yet too far! Man! I like how Belle is a fighter and not a prissy weakling! Keep fighting Belle! I agree the Beast must be really hurt !
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Woohoo! Yeah!

Yaaaaaay! He's going to get his human body back!

Good riddance. Glad Gaston is dead. I knew you had it in you Lefou!