| Reviews for Loyalty |
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sondrex76 chapter 2 . 5/22 Nice fanfic. That was a really interesting read. Thanks for writing and have a great day! |
Felhound chapter 2 . 4/22 Short and sweet. Harry seems a bit out of character, and that’s fine. It wouldn’t be the same story otherwise. |
Felhound chapter 1 . 4/22 This is something different. This is something good. |
magicanimegurl chapter 2 . 2/22 The balance of Harry and Hiroto is perfect. The thought they have helpgive life and personality. I like the friends Harry made. Love this. Write on! |
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 2 . 12/21/2019 Weird but intriguing. Harry became a summons then? And a boss summons at that? Has he been to the summons realm then? What is his territory? How does he get underlings? Is he at all venomous or poisonous thanks to the basilisk mark in his DNA? What about being able to kill others with a look? |
Amu4ever chapter 2 . 11/19/2019 Hm, this story made my head all strange. Made me talk and thing in ways I didn't (but did) before. It's quite interesting. It's fascinating. And it proves to me one very obvious thing: Your story truly touched me. It wan an honour to read this. Thank you. :-) |
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 11/19/2019 Well, that's not quite a kick-ass summon, but it is gentle and soft and different and warm like a welcoming fire. :-) |
ShadowedHeavens chapter 2 . 11/12/2019 That was beautiful. Thank you for writing this. ...and now I'm off to read your other stories :) |
crazy-n-insane chapter 2 . 6/14/2019 I don’t know if I reviewed before or not. But this short piece just hits home. It is so raw and honest and cautious and uncertain and while it may not fit a longer piece of fiction, it is perfect in its current form. I have read and reread this every time I come across it, no matter what. Simply brilliant. |
Ai Huiyuan chapter 2 . 5/6/2019 That’s a beautiful story! I liked how Harry developed from his betrayed state to a trusting person once more. He still has his saving people thing but it perfectly fits into this new world as he doesn’t rush to every fight but let’s them fight their own battles while acting like a save heaven because no one gets hurt under his wings. Well done! |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/4/2019 3 I can see Harry agreeing to creating a summoning scroll for himself, if only so that he can more easily come to His People's aid if something like that happens while they are far from the safety of his wings. |
YuunaFiction chapter 2 . 8/8/2018 Wow, that was a fantastic read. I loved it. Well done and thank you for sharing it! |
R. A Cross chapter 2 . 3/23/2018 This is precious and I wish there could be more. Nevertheless, I am happy with this. Truly precious |
DarkFireMoon chapter 1 . 3/6/2018 This is so very beautiful, I thank you for sharing this with us. |
Guest chapter 2 . 3/3/2018 Honestly I have no clue how to describe this because I suck at describing things in traditional words and traditional ways. But to me this feels like rejuvenating rain after a long dry spell and the feeling after rain when everything is bright and just all beautiful. It feels like the good sides of blues and purples a little bit of yellow and grey tossed in there. It has an earthy quality but with a fluidity of water but the slow burn and passion of fire, and I just feel. I love this so much. This quality is rare. Thank you for creating this. Thank you, it is beautiful. |