THE BEST

D'awwwww, this chapter was just so adorable!

I love how you portray Athena because she's pretty much the same in the game and I think this fanfic is awesome anyway! I reaaaaally hate Kelvin, though, and I want him to die in a swirling vortex of hate and darkness before drowning in another pit of fire. I know how dark that sounds but still, this fic is still as amazing as I remembered it.

But I've been worried. You haven't reviewed "Rise of the fallen" in awhile, are you alright?

Anyways I can't wait for your story, Ace attorney: married couples.

Best. Fanfic. Ever. Cause I'm so awesome. And Kelvin I was a demon against

Awwww, poor Athena. I hope y/n brings Kelvin to justice! I also ADORE this story, I also like Polly and Junie and how you portray them in this beautiful fanfic of fluff! Btw, I updated "Rise of the fallen".

If you want you can have a look at it.

Awww, the romance was strong in this chapter!

I loved how Athena and Junie plotted like that and I love how Juniper was afraid of the blue badger...that thing really is creepy, btw, and I loved how he comforts her. It was a lot like the latest chapter of "Turnabout matrimony".

I did a few updates which you might want to look at. I even updated Rise of the fallen two times.

When you get the time, please look at them if that is alright.

Anyways, amazing chapter! I love it!

This chapter has very cute moments. (Kawaiidesu!)

You've improved so far; I'll give you two headlights (thumbs) up for that.

There's a question I have for you. Have you ever heard of using the seimicolon before? There is one sentence that definitely needs one, I believe. It's "

About Athena's hairstyle, it's not called a pigtail. It's more like a side ponytail. If you did keep on saying pigtails, people would tend to think that Athena has twin-tails.

You definitely need to fix the locations of your commas, I'm afraid. It's randomly going all over the place such as putting it in before a character's name during a dialogue. Also, there were times when you didn't include a comma before a conjunction (but, and, or) in compound sentences.

Well, I'm going to brace myself with a roll bar installed. Okay I'm exaggerating too much, so I apologize for that. That sixth-to-last paragraph though. It definitely needs to be broken up into more because you are having mulitple dialogue and thoughts jumbled up together into one.

One more thing, singular nouns goes with an "s" verb such as has.

Pretty good concept. There are grammar mistakes, however. I can list a couple.

"Themis Legal Academy. A highschool were students prepare themselves to the legal world."

Firstly, the academy's name should have been part of this whole sentence. You should replace the first period with a comma. Secondly, what does "were" mean? Do you mean "where"? Lastly, shouldn't "to" be replaced with "for"?

I apologize for that criticism, but the errors bother me a bit.

Congratulations on finishing the story! I enjoyed reading it, and I have to say, wow. You put chapters out so quickly, I never felt like I was waiting too long before the next part would come out.

Stay Gold!
-HiroNinja

ARE YOU F &!NG KIDDING ME! THIS FANFIC IS THE BEST! IT NEVER BORED ME AND IT KEPT SUPRISING ME ALL THE TIME! THIS IS SO GOOD! Sad that it ended but it ended on a good way! When you release a new fanfic. I'll be reading it and giving you a honest review like i did with this.
P.S you rule!

Sequel need a sequel with a few turnaboutS, a few fighting sequences because this story was amazing!

Awwww. How sweet, I hope you do another story soon! This was adorable and cute and cuddly.

Thanks for the suggestion, I'll keep it in mind.

I think this story was amazing, the sweet little parts in it were just so cute and the romance it had in there was beyond adorable. I also love how you conveyed everyone's emotions and thoughts, nice job!

This was a nice conclusion to a nice story.

Well done! I hope I will see more from you soon!

It will be a girl or this fanfic is in vain.

Maybe in the next chapter, Athena and (Y/N) could have another ticklish session?...

Yay! Double Wedding! Hey, have you made a forum yet? I posted on how to do it in PM

Oh my goodness! Now a wedding! This is so sweet to the core! The story goes so smoothly and makes me happy to read it! Good job! Keep it up! Love this fanfic!