I was thinking to myself that no one had written a story like this just when I found yours. I'm really enjoying it and hope you continue it!

I like it! This is a cool idea.

But, you should make the chapters longer.

Update soon!

Love the update :)

Ooh she's starting to like him even more! And eric is just a psychotic freak show that needs to be tripped into the chasm! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yay! Please Update!

Uughh freaking Eric, ruining everyone's life...but Zeke deserved that coffee on his head...and are you gonna be including the war in this or are you gonna change it so there is no war? I can't wait for the next chapter!

Eeeeeek! So cute, but don't kill any of them, seriously.

I think that this will happen sometime: Tris will slowly realize that her denied feelings toward Tobias aware wrong and then they will start dating and then there will be no war because they delete the files and they get married and live happily ever after! Oh yeah, and Marcus Peter Drew Jeanine and Eric will be 'accidentally' tripped I to the chasm! It's that a genius idea!? I don't know if some of it would be true but whatever. I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next!

I LOVE YOUR STORY! I love how Tris isn't 'Four' and how Tobias isn't not abused (not that I think he should've been) To me Tris seems like a person who would punch Marcus before he actually gets to hit Tris. But what's really killing me is the fear landscape. Will Four still be Four? Will they even call him Four? What'll Tris's reaction be when she finds out that someone has less fears than her? I CAN'T WAIT!

Loving the story so far :D
Need more chapters :p

Love it! Can't wait for the next update! :)

So far so good! Can't wait for the update!

more i need more chapters

More please, this is so awesome!

Update soon please... i love it ... UPDATE! SOOOOON! PLEASE!