It could be better.

Very nice story. I especially liked the way Jon dealt with Daenerys.

Oh yeah! Definitely saw that one coming!

that last comment made me think of the small council room turned into a blood bath as all sides either tried to kill one another or manipulate another to do it for them.

Hmm a story wher people from Azeroth had run to Westeros and now living in the kings gift and alied with Starks. I can bet that Varain wouldn't be big funn of this situation but even he would understand that people from Azeroth need help form Starks.

Yes! I wondered about that too when I was in game with friends. He's like "Hey, how come there no Warcraft and game of thrones crossover? Wouldn't it make sense that undead horde is somewhere in the North"

I laughed with satisfaction when reading this. Personally I enjoyed this. The Night King and Frostmourne huh? Totally pictured it in my head.

But honestly you made a mistake when typing this. The quotation marks at the beginning of every line is placed at the bottom when it should have been placed on top. Please avoid such a mistake. It maybe small but it could ruin stories.

While I would have wanted you to expand this, (you know, show in detail Jon Snow's acquisition of Frostmourne, his raising of an army of undead, the meat wagons and the plague as well gaining control of the other lords and territories) the story maybe better off a one-shot.

more need more good this if