Good job. Could see this happen.

Finally! We - your readers - are with you in this! Now: GO ON - Can't wait to read more of this.

I love how they both want to have sex but are pretending they don't for the sake of the other person, and then he finally gives in to how upset all this has to make him. Very nice job.

Wow amazing and brilliant .

My lord what was done to castle ?
If he wanted to forget, why did they shot at him if he was complicent in he abduction and memory loss?

So glad that kate can bring him back as that he is finally breaking down in her arms .
Now he /they can start to heal together .

Wonderfully done

Thank you

LOVED IT!

I didn't see that coming but I loved it. I wish they had time to explore these subtleties in the show. Thank you for a wonderful fill-in!
Bravo,
Lisa

Oh, this is so bittersweet and well done!

At first I was laughing about the scene most of us already seen with the sneak peek for next week. And then you are able to put in a twist nobody (at least I) didn't see coming.

I wish something like this would happen on the show, because Castle IS suffering, deep down he's torn about what happened to him. He's good at acting normal, he's good at goofing around. But I believe the kidnapping and everything else he found out about it will take its toll on him.

I really enjoyed your story. Thanks for sharing it!

This was far more heartbreaking than I expected...but nicely done!

This was great. So much pent up frustration and emotions. Real life. Great job.

Great job with this especially omitting the stupid ringing phone. Rick's breakdown is very believable!

Ohhh...I loved this. If only it were going to go this way. Stupid phone.

Oh as much as it kills me, I totally understand her relief (or at least that is how I see what she felt). I LOVE this little sneak peek but damn the phone interruptions! It's probably Ryan! He is always interrupting!

Well not what I expected but still very good. I've been waiting on someone to write this s.p.

I like your take on this. No ringing phone to interrupt them. And Rick, finally breaking down. I like it.