That was awesome. Please write more of this! This is the best fanfic ever!

Aw... is this story abandoned? I'm liking it...

Awesome, i loved reading these.

Quite possibly one of my favorite oneshots about my favorite semi-crack pairing. I binged this entire thing and I've gotta say, only compliments intended, that I like your AUs most of all. Especially the second one. I'm not sure if I'm the first to mention it or not, but you should consider making a legit story out of that last one. God knows I'd read it avidly. Anyways, this is pretty good. Not many Flaming Ocean stories out there, but its good to see that out of the few there are some very goods ones. See ya next time, keep it up, please!

I didn't like this chapter. Felt like you're creating your own Neptune Vasilias which means OOC which means all of this will never become a reality no matter how well I can picture it. I love this ship but this kind of fanfics makes me think it's not suited to become a thing.

Nice to have you back. I hope we get to see a little of there job before the big Grimm invasion.

I kind of like the Neptune/Yang pairing. They both seem to be players, but they're a bit more complex then that.

Again niiiice. This was fun. Weiss is a sweet girl even though she comes off as aloof and icy to most. Reminds me of someone but cant remember who...hmm.

This chapter was worth the wait !
hope you update soon :)

I find this... unexplained. Really you needed parts of this from Yang's POV, and a complete re-work of the Ball arc. Why does she want to dance with Neptune? What does she see in him? She hasn't even seen him as more than an acquaintance right now and she is very cold to him in Burning the Candle, even in this fanfic.

I seriously don't see any natural progression that would warrant Yang dancing with Neptune. Not to mention it appears to be an inherent trait of Yang's character that she's a mother hen. Yang herself said she could turn heads, Yang is the hot one, the party girl, if she wanted to dance at the ball she could have. But she didn't. She was on the balcony watching over everyone, ensuring everything went perfect for Blake. She really wasn't even socialising.

I don't see why she'd suddenly abandon that vigil in order to dance with the boy her friend is clearly still crushing heavily on and Yang has observed to be sulking and clearly hurting from Neptune's rejection. Hell, Yang will have seen Weiss light up when Neptune came up, have seen Weiss and Neptune dancing. That borders Yang's behaviour, when combined with their flirting, on sniping or quite possibly being willing to cheat with Neptune. She absolutely wouldn't do that to Weiss. It seems very random, forced and out of Yang's character.

Yang has shown zero signs, aside from one or two smiles in this which you're allowed to do obviously, of even liking Neptune as a person, let alone a friend or something more. And Yang has shown a lot of signs of being RWBY's matriarch and for placing her team above herself. I don't think she would do this, by which I mean even bother with romance, until she knows Blake's better and that Weiss is over Neptune. Hell I imagine Yang, if she ever did show an interest in Neptune, which she hasn't in canon nor even in this, would actually ask Weiss' permission before pursuing.

This pairing deserves more

I love Neptune and Yang as a couple and I love your one-shots so I hope you update soon :)

The update was sweet. Loved it as usual. :).
Now for the problem of scene changes. When you upload your story onto your account you can edit it before you publish it. Just bring the curser to the end of the last sentence of the scene and then click on the tool (_) from the toolbar on top. Tada!

Love this! Please continue this AU. I'm thinking there's still more. Oh! Maybe a version on how Sun and Blake got together. OMG, totally loving this!

IVE NEVER WRITTEN ON THIS WEBSITE SO IM NOT SURE BUT I BELIEVE IN YOU (LOVING YOUR STORY BY THE WAY)