Reviews for Must Be Something In the Water
YaaasssHayffie chapter 6 . 5/18
Please please PLEASE another story about Helios
chizuru300 chapter 6 . 12/21/2016
J'aime beaucoup le prénom que tu as choisi pour leur gamin ! C'est intéressant une fic développée où ils ont un enfant, souvent c'est juste évoqué à la fin mais on a jamais plus d'info.
Encore une super fic, bravo !
roughdiamond5 chapter 6 . 6/2/2016
Haymitch is the BEST father. I think a lot of people fixate on his flaws and his fears, and don't get me wrong, you've done a masterful job of portraying them. But you've also spent so much time on how good he is to his son and how much he cares, and sometimes it made me downright giddy to read that. Effie was very realistic too, balancing her discomfort of life in Thirteen and the changing Capitol with her love for Haymitch and her son (wrapped in fear) with her practical side (which I don't see a lot in fic and am glad to see here). I read this story voraciously - thank you for making it so captivating.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/13/2016
Love the story! Absoultly wonderful
takost chapter 6 . 1/22/2016
Dear Ellana-san! I have to say you "A lot of thanks" once again. Recently I've read «Must be something in the water" and I can say surely that it's the best fanfic about Hayffie, which I had ever read. I got unforgettable emotions and I really empathized Effie, Haymitch and their future baby. Some moments were so tense, that I was afraid to read further. Especially the moment in the control center, when Effie felt bad. She lost a lot of blood. And she almost lost her baby! It was terrible, and I hoped, that she would live. But due to such moments, I saw real feelings of Haymitch. Inspite of his difficult past and demons inside him, he overcame himself. And he could really love Effie and their baby.
Oh, there are so many thoughts in my head, but I can't express all what I feel. This fanfic is incredible! During the whole story I laughed, smiled, worried about my favorite characters and even cried. You wrote something more, than the usual story. Thank you for the exciting emotions!
marizpe chapter 6 . 1/17/2016
I loved the story! You know, I think you should remind us to read your other stories, I bet a lot of people ask you to write about a pregnant Effie in HADS, so maybe on your comments at the end of the chapter you can say check this story.
I loved how Haymitch was going to leave his life behind to stay in the Capitol with Effie and his son, and planned to buy a house in four. And finally how he made Effie to go with him to 12 and told her they were having a toast.
And I loved to read all the story in one day and dont have to wait another week to know what was going to happen p
marizpe chapter 4 . 1/17/2016
OMG I dont know why I havent read this story! I need to see all of your stories again and read the ones I have missed.
I loved this very long chapter! It waa very cute when Haymitch told her that he made a deal wuth the baby and Effie was going to buy her a pony.
I loved the way Haymitch had change so now he is madly in love with the baby and of course Effie.
And the ring... I see that as a promise!
Guest chapter 6 . 11/30/2015
That was a beautiful story
Nyx-dB chapter 6 . 7/29/2015
Okay, I'm not even going to try and be cool. It was fantastic! I love how you story have such a great balance of angst and joy. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. I definitely like a little Hayffie family. You write the characters so well.
Lottielue1 chapter 6 . 5/31/2015
Aww really cute story, like always when you write a story it was incredibly well written. The last part was perfect and it ended great.
IanLevitt chapter 5 . 12/27/2014
WHAT THE HELL THAT WAS SO SUDDEN IT'S NEARLY 1:30 AM AND I'M CRYING
IanLevitt chapter 3 . 12/27/2014
The baking scene was A so cute until y'know

But if you ever stop writing, I will cry

YOU ARE AMAZING UGH
IanLevitt chapter 1 . 12/27/2014
I'm in love with this story and I'm reading it to my great great grandchildren I love you
chrisi2503 chapter 6 . 12/22/2014
I read the entire story and I want to tell you that I simply loved it. You did an amazing job and I realized that you can write everything: angst, drama, romance, love and this story held everything in store. I already fell for the idea of them having a baby but how you wrote about the pregnancy and every aspect was perfect. You also really showed how especially Haymitch developped and the scene with the ring might have been my favorite. Thank you so much for writing this story and for the length of it.
Thearts4life chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
Please please pleeeaaassseee write a sequel to this. This is one of the best hayffie stories I have read
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