Cool.

Thank u! Great story! Keep writing!

Great story.

I'm so glad you decided to add a final chapter. This was a great story and I truly enjoyed reading it. Take care.

:)

I can not believe it! The story is really over? This not only makes you sad :o( I'm still much more that you can believe me.
This was a really beautifully written ending for this story and I loved to pursue them.
Neal's recovery was short and sweet :o) ... because of me would have to be longer. But it was, as you wrote it very nice.
And finally you have done it again, to let the friendship between Neal and Peter are highly visible so right. This was and is just absolutely beautiful.
What I still really liked were those scenes on the cliff. WOW ... I really had to swallow hard.
Thank you that you have a story shared with us. I love it and I will certainly read more often.
Hope they hear or read again what I from you. Because you can write extremely well, no doubt.

Awesome work! One more chapter to wrap it up please!

I have to agree clearly PippaFrost.
"YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! RIGHT NOW!"
:o) :o) :o)

OH MY GOD! O MY GOD WHAT THE FUCK!? YOU HAVE TO UPDATE! RIGHT NOW! OH MY GOD!

Got to have that clincher chapter please!

Hey, love ur story. I do hope u add a chapter and give it some closure. Would love to read that.
thanks

God! Now I thought everything is going well and then comes something.
Another battle, Neal with so many pain (poor Neal) but then the rescue by Jones and Co!
Neal, God do not do this just. Do not die me yes - do you hear !
And then Peter is still unconscious. Where is all this world coming to?
I can not tell you how desperate you wait another chapter.
Beautiful Christmas.

Great chapter. I hope you add one final one with a scene between Neal and Peter now that they've been rescued.

Can't wait for more!

I love this story!