EPILOGUE!

I actually really like your ending of Percy’s death. I just found your story because I was reading your other story series: Everlasting Hero.
Just saying, I like how you ended it with Percy’s death because it is realistic, and you (and Percy) go out with a bang. No matter how sad it makes me (it reminds me of Iris’ death in the Flash), I enjoy the story.

Thats fucking dark. You see your friend after a long time and then week later they are found dead. Fucking brutal.

This was a good story. A lot of the other stories out there have percy being too forgiving, but I like how u made it darker and more realistic.

The reason he does is because august is the star of the school year

I'm dying...

This story was amazing.

It started off alright then it just devolved, kinda like bioshock infinite.

Welp congratulations on your great fanfiction. I couldn't out it down and you made me deep some semblance of emotions, mainly anger and euphoria.

It's one in the morning where I am so good night and thanks for the emotion check.

BTW: American Revolutionary War

That's not necessarily true, in The Last Olympian, the forces were 40 against thousands yet they still won. Kronos army was more powerful but the Olympians were triumphant. Yes, I know that The Last Olympians is fiction, but your story is too, and even if Percy wouldn't win against Luke in the real world, this is the fiction world. Which means anything is possible.

Make sequel

I'm perfectly okay with how you ended your story. but I was displeased with all the character's you killed. I understand where you're coming from. because as you said no one man can win a war. and if your an assassin you have an even more chance of dieing. I see perfect sense in were you're coming from. sorry for the long review.

Lord R. Malfoy V.

honestly this was the only way to end the story for me at least

Chapter 36 was ...emotional... but a good ending, maybe not the one I wanted, but one I understand and respect. This story deserved way more attention. But I am happy I discovered this story because I really loved, I dont regret every word I read. Thank you for this story and good luck in the future.

Well...can't say that was the ending I was expecting, but it was a good one. I fully understand that your justification on this final. I'll be waiting for your next story. You've set a high bar with this story...I'm sure you will easily surpass that line. I remeber scouring Fanfiction to find a good story to read. At first u had extreme doubts on your story. I was proven wrong in 2 chapters. Take your time on your stories, I personally don't mind the wait. Qualityquantity. Have an amazing day!