yep, that would have done it. You are right-no clue where that scene came from. Writers error? one of the few they've made, or ulterior motive, who knows. Nice job. You gotta do something with safe gifts after the clip that was just released. IF you haven't seen it:
watch?v9_x2aR462zE and watch Kensi's face when the "safe gift is talked about!

Loving these densi extras
cant wait for the next one :)

Oh we really needed that! Did not like that scene at all! Thank you :)

I have to agree...that was not Deeks, in fact that was the exact opposite of his nature..I know that different tactics are used for interrogation, but to after all Deeks went through as a child...to have him yelling and becoming violent to get answers through fear, is so contradicting it's crazy...but at least this story is good:)

Perfect! Great scene.

I agree with you, I did not like that interrogation, either. There was definitely something lost between filming and editing. I've been a big fan of every episode this season, this one is my least favorite by far...

Good job!

I've been trying to write something like this, too, actually :) I agree with you... But I did feel that you forgot, he DID follow through on tht threat once... Just sayin... Maybe a follow up of that admittance?

Good chapter, can't wait for more :)

Blessings,
bookdiva

Awww

That little fight was expected since I first saw Talia flirting with Deeks...this chapter was the funny version of Deeks finding out that I needed to hear...so thank you for the good laugh...and the adorable ending

This was fantastic I loved it

Yes! This would have been a perfect scene after the show!

nice job. well written, just hope this is somewhere near what really happens!

Awww.

I like it!

I'm actually a Granger fan. However, the way you have portrayed him here and Deeks' response to him - outstanding! I loved it. Great job!

Really cute! I can't wait till they finally get to some real Densi relationship action.