Great story hope to see more soon.

Dear Eva:

Just thought I should mention this: It should be "sending our heroes through time", not "our hero's trough time". (Also, it should be "the last were two girls", not "lasts" - and "stakes to kill vampires", not "stacks" - and "where the girl with the brown hair lay", not "lied" - and, I think, "when a whooshing sound was heard on the bridge", not "wooing" - and… well, you get the idea.)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

This has been an enjoyable story. Please, let me/us know, do you intend to continue the saga?

Evil is a weird word. A label, a prejudice. Easy to assign, difficult to remove.
You haven't seen battle magic, yet.
Good luck.

I am enjoying this story so much but only now realized it hasn't been touched for many years. I wish you'd find your way back to it and finish it.

Not bad. Could work on the spelling and grammar a bit but the story is fantastic.

I really liked this !

I very much enjoyed the story so far. I hope you'll resume it!

-DM

Update real soon, please don't leave your readers in suspense for long! :)

Please continue this story and finish it. :)

Pinkfox, Time Toss is an excellent story that I would like to not only see continued, but also edited because of some grammer errors that I have noticed through out all 14 chapters.

The errors are too numerous to list here, and even if I could list them I would have to search from the prologue onward.

-_- A task that I am not willing to do at the moment. Unless I would like to re read the story at a later time, which I may, then I may write down what grammer errors that I have noticed and list them in a later review.

Lazy? meh... perhaps.. But I would like to read more chapters beyond chapter 14 before I review again.. if at all possible.

Thank you for your time and patience. *bows*

Mostly good, the lines of your plot were good enough to keep me here despite you obvious issues with spelling. I'm not referring to the magical names of things, but ordinary spelling and punctuation. As I said before the story was good enough to keep me here to the end, so please don't treat this like a flame.

you might want to try using some contractions. it makes it seem more realistic.

this is an awesome story whyd u stop?

ya i totally love the story and u should make a new chapter real soon

Awe, that was cute. I'm going to have to go soon.

Is there anymore updates?