Wow! Hope there is more to this!

Castle is an asshole, really

WOW? Why should he lie, what about? Did I miss something in previous chapters? I have to reread to understand? Cam't wait to read more of this ...

I don't get it, what does He could at least give her this" means? Why should he pretend for her? This is so sad...

I have to say it. This fic is like a literary version of a Hot Pocket. It looks and smells fantastic, but when you jump in there and take that first bite (because it's been a long hiatus and you're hungry, don't judge) you forget about the chemical reaction that takes place which turns the outer shell into hot, molten M-rated lava. I understand this is a well known physical trait of of the Pocketae genus shared by the frozen snack and post-hiatus fic species but I think I have discovered an additional trait. Because when you reach the core of the Hot Pocket/fic for your final bite, you suddenly find that instead of the expected third degree burn, it's suddenly an ice cold block of angst you never saw coming. Excuse me while I go pen a letter to the FDAA (Food, Drug, and Angst Administration) about regulating these dangerous Fic Pockets. KC, you are TROUBLE!

Please consider adding more to this. I'd love to know why?

ohhh, that's so sad. that makes me sad. : ( poor Castle baby, he's trying for her.

Sad and depressing

Dark indeed!

He could at least give her that?

Oh wow. Not where I expected that to go. Absolutely top notch!

Sadly they still have far to go...

Holy cow. So painful, and yet so hot.

Even though Castle wasn't ready for it, Kate needed the contact to reassure that he was in fact alive and with her. Good job in showing that.

His reaction at the end could be due to the fact that he wasn't ready.

Good job.

KATE OMG
FRICK
GET OUT
How do you do it I am dead