Short and threatening. ;) Nicely done.

Ahhhhhhhhhhghhhhhghhhhck!

Wow.

Amazing.

Ahahahahaha! Fantastic. You have such writing skills to be envied. I loved this. The ebb and flow of your writing matching spot on the emotions, and your description, it was amazing. There were no odd or unfitting phrasing that detracted from the scene, but it all just supported and added to it exactly how it should, and it all clicked beautifully. And it is really hard to do a cut-out scene and make it feel complete, but you really rounded it out nicely. Great job! I really enjoyed this!

Oh man, that was a bit heartbreaking as a one-shot. Nicely done!

You are one lucky person for deciding to start and end this snippet the way you did. Anything more, a little more of their story and a little more of your amazing ability of characterization and it would be Lethal all over again for me. I can't even comprehend how you can just decide to write a few lines and kick straight (there's a word we don't like :D ) into my feels.
Can I just say how much I love this 'non finished' activity? It feels like a glimpse into what's happening in your mind when you're not thinking about the big*cough*FMM*cough* story.

This could turn out to be something really good. With Ichigo as a ghost of his former self and a Grimmjow back from the dead. Just an idea if you need somethhing when if you decide to go on with this! Love it so far!

Oh please don't keep this a oneshot, I would love to read more of it!

Oh, that's damn good, whether it stays this one-shot or gets expanded upon in the future. It felt like a very real reaction on Ichigo's part. Nicely done.

Does that mean grim is alive? .-. Either way seeing something new from you always makes me smile and yeah c: I look forward to more

I really, really, really wish this had a continuation. It's so flawless and just... great! Jeeze, you excel at everything you write, Junichi, even at your brain poop! What's up with that? Loved it. Ten outta ten.

Do you have any more brain poop?

Kenzie