Very interesting story! I loved the character interactions and how the plot flowed seamlessly. Knowing her history from Gravity Falls, I knew she would show her true colors soon enough.

Fantastic!

nice job with this

whoa! great ending!

lesson learned, never let a girl fall in love w/ you in a wrong way.
Or don't choose over your insane horrid girlfriend to a simple best friend you've always got.

ohh I can't wait for the next chapter. Calhoun is gonna kick butt Giffany.

YEAH!

GASP! Giffany is threatening Vanellope, why? who is she to tell her to stay away from Ralph. She doesn't belong to Ralph

Vanellope has a point. But for my opinion love doesn't last forever.

Oh no Ralph you can't tell her about your friendship w/ Vanellope. It'll make her furious

wow! Ralph's back story was really great. It actually happened on the movie

oh no this is wrong! Ralph can't fall in love w/ Giffany. She'll give him an endless love

Buen final.
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Good end.

Ahora Ralph ve la verdad sobre Giffany.
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Now Ralph sees the truth about Giffany.

Pobre Ralph, él se siente solo y eso lo ha llevado a una situación peligrosa.
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Poor Ralph, he feels lonely and this has led him to a dangerous situation.

Giffany significa problemas pero Ralph no lo sabe aun.
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Giffany means problems but Ralph does not know yet.

It's "Soos and the Real Girl" all over again!

Calhoun is ready to open a can of whoop ass!