I really liked this fanfic of the karasuno team going to the new bar and the getting drunk, when it was all just really plan. I liked it.

Love it! I love Tsukki! And Suga and Daichi are amazing! I can honestly imagine all of them acting like this. But one piece of advice, you should have added Oikawa and Iwaizumi, because honestly, having a drunk Oikawa while Iwaizumi stays sane, or vice versa, would have maded this my dream FanFic.

This was fucking hilarious, can't get over how cats flooded the bar once Nekoma came in

Omg drunk Noya was the best. When Asahi was Jesus I died. It was hilarious. My favorite line is I get to have sex with a Jesus. That was amazing. But the ending was so sweet but also funny

THIS IS SOOOO AWESOME THANK YOU! This made me laugh so hard XD

This is just hysterical! Throwing alcohol into any gathering of our favorite volleyball nerds is bound to be a disaster, but this story really captures the sheer level of chaos our boys are capable of XD

That being said, the main point of criticism that I have all relates to the bar itself. How are Yachi and Kiyoko the only ones running the bar? They're still in college, too, right, so they don't own it (or do they?). Does one of their family members own it and just left them in charge for the night? How can they get away with all this chaos without someone calling the police, as Tsukki mentioned?

Anyway, I really liked this a lot. Great job :)

I have just read a work of pure awesomeness bestowed up by Asahi and the heavens. No words can express how amazing this was

THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING THING EVER. FUCK. IM MOVED.

HA HA HA HA. Wow I can't breath. This was so funny. When asahi looked like Jesus but said he was the leader Volleyball. Made my day and how how all of them agreed in respect. Yas and how it all ended up as tsukishima birthday. It was beautiful.

I love it, this is precious ! It made me laugh so hard. My, I just can't. Perfect. Love Tsukki. Great idea to choose his point of view for the reading. It makes it all the better !

My gosh. This killed me. My side still hurts and my cheeks ache from biting them to keep from laughing.

I am not coherent enough to form anything close to a proper review. My best attempt is that this is an utterly awesome piece of fanfic

This is brilliant. I love it !

Holy God I had the time of my life reading this fan fiction. Reading it out loud and soon became drunk by reading this 10/10

I am howling with laughter. Honestly, this fanfiction is amazing and funny and they're all such huge dorks I can't believe this is not exactly how a party involving them all would happen (Asahi is going to regret this so much I'm sure but it was hilarious).
I don't think people were too OOC past the obvious drunkenness, so it's ok on that part. I haven't seen any mistake I remember as well.
Thanks for writing this fanfiction ! Have a good day !