| Reviews for Deep Breath |
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Bellinda Cross chapter 1 . 6/24/2015 Oh, that was precious. Good job! Thumbs up! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 YA know, I've never been interested in JasonXPiper, but the way you write them makes them come alive. I am immediately in love with this couple in all of their steady, domestic love |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2015 Awwww! That is the most wonderful writing |
engineerwenlock chapter 1 . 2/16/2015 Loved this. Not a major fan of Piper and Jason, but you made them more real, and that made me like them just a bit more. |
Rebeccaseal chapter 1 . 10/25/2014 Three girls? Poor Jason. But the press totally suits Piper. *jumping up and down for no reason* |
nikitabella chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 Okay, it's been a while since I've read anything like this. AMAZING! You just opened my eyes for a part of their relationship I never considered. Keep up the brilliant work! :)) |
Kendra PJO chapter 1 . 10/6/2014 Deep breath... I love how you work the theme throughout the piece. Also, I can tell you either have experience trying to get siblings out the door on time, or are extremely empathetic towards your parents. This describes the hustle and bustle so well! |
I am that Writer chapter 1 . 10/6/2014 That was unbelievably cuteāand I thought it was plenty romantic! -IATW |
nj chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 Awww that was soo cute I LOVE your Jason and piper one's they are always a breathe of fresh air because I don't see many people on here who can truly capture them love it keep it up |
HecateA fan chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 Wow... I feel sorry for Jason so badly right now. |
GibbyOrdo chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 This was cool! I really liked it, and I agree about the balance thing. It would be cool if you wrote another thing like this. |
apologiesforthebadfic chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 There are no words to describe how much I love this. This is how I picture Jasper, pure and simple. Fantastic job! -Jace ;) |
Praetor of Rome chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 Perfect domestic fluff while also exploring why Jason and Piper's relationship works. Ahh, fluff with meaning is the best and you did a wonderful job bringing these two parts together. I may have mentioned this before, but I love the details of your stories that show that you spent time thinking about the characters and fleshing out headcanons. It also makes them more realistic and completely draws me in. |
baby Cyclopes chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 Lol :) and I agree with you about piper helping Jason be normal. :) |
Angryhenry chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 yay |