Reviews for Deep Breath
Bellinda Cross chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
Oh, that was precious. Good job! Thumbs up!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
YA know, I've never been interested in JasonXPiper, but the way you write them makes them come alive. I am immediately in love with this couple in all of their steady, domestic love
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2015
Awwww! That is the most wonderful writing
engineerwenlock chapter 1 . 2/16/2015
Loved this. Not a major fan of Piper and Jason, but you made them more real, and that made me like them just a bit more.
Rebeccaseal chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
Three girls? Poor Jason. But the press totally suits Piper. *jumping up and down for no reason*
nikitabella chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Okay, it's been a while since I've read anything like this. AMAZING! You just opened my eyes for a part of their relationship I never considered. Keep up the brilliant work! :))
Kendra PJO chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Deep breath... I love how you work the theme throughout the piece. Also, I can tell you either have experience trying to get siblings out the door on time, or are extremely empathetic towards your parents. This describes the hustle and bustle so well!
I am that Writer chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
That was unbelievably cute—and I thought it was plenty romantic!

-IATW
nj chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Awww that was soo cute I LOVE your Jason and piper one's they are always a breathe of fresh air because I don't see many people on here who can truly capture them love it keep it up
HecateA fan chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Wow...
I feel sorry for Jason so badly right now.
GibbyOrdo chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
This was cool! I really liked it, and I agree about the balance thing. It would be cool if you wrote another thing like this.
apologiesforthebadfic chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
There are no words to describe how much I love this. This is how I picture Jasper, pure and simple. Fantastic job!
-Jace ;)
Praetor of Rome chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Perfect domestic fluff while also exploring why Jason and Piper's relationship works. Ahh, fluff with meaning is the best and you did a wonderful job bringing these two parts together. I may have mentioned this before, but I love the details of your stories that show that you spent time thinking about the characters and fleshing out headcanons. It also makes them more realistic and completely draws me in.
baby Cyclopes chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Lol :)
and I agree with you about piper helping Jason be normal. :)
Angryhenry chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
yay
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