I'm loving this story please come back and finish it if you can. Also damn you had mad writing skills for a 13 year old. You had a better vocabulary than me back then than I do right now lmao.

This story is adorable.

Just came across this story just now and it thrilled me knowing how they progress their relationship but to the point of having some troubles along the way with Kaneki being abducted. Is it the time for him to transform into a ghoul? Hoping you'll update this!

Dang a 13 yr old wrote this ? Pure talent there :)
Every chap gave me the shimmyshimmy, love it
salute ! Hope ur 17 self could see how awesome you've started ;)

I love this fanfic, this is the second time I have read it.

I wrote down the grammar errors/misspellings I found this time:
- 1
- "but it Kaneki" - "but Kaneki"
- "pillow-y, hosted" - "pillow-y and hosted"
- 2
- "Kaneki, was" - "Kaneki was"
- "Rize sitting the" - "Rize sitting in the"
- "emits from the room" - "emerge from the room"
- "It was until" - "It wasn't until"
- "Noticed Touka subconsciously" - "Noticed Touka unconsciously", there are probably a more fitting word to use here
- "was cold enough to forgo" - "was warm enough to forgo", if you ment it was really cold "was too cold to forgo", or switch forgo with a different word
- "recovering over" - "recovering from"
- "grass, still a vibrant green" - "grass, still a vibrant green which"
- "once and awhile" - "once in a while"
- "it almost look" - "it almost looks"
- "offer they" - "offer for them to"
- "succumbing the surface" - "covering the surface"
- "if it wasn't the meaning behind it" - "if it wasn't for the meaning behind it"
- 3
- "faces Touka executed" - "faces Touka made"
- "Then on" - "From then on"
- "I have?" - "I do?"
- "It was until she realized" - "It wasn't until she realized"
- "he'd saw" - "he saw"
- 4
- "in thick, rich" - "in a thick, rich"
- "in which she tucks" - "which she tucks"
- 5
- "watches at loss" - "watches at a loss"
- "stop, put her" - "stop, she put her"
- 6
- "The floors are falling" - "The floor are falling"
- "who the hell carried" - "who the hell carry"
- "does he pull" - "he pulls"
- 8
- "eyes too bright" - "eyes are too bright"
- 11
- "her respond" - "her response
- 12
- "Everywhere just 5" - "Everywhere within 5"
- "entirely of European" - "entirely covered in an European"
- 13
- "is an old creaky" - "feels like an old creaky"
- "His skin is like" - "His skin feels like"
- "you as well, wouldn't I?" - "you as well, would I?"

I know this hasn't been updated in ages so you'll probably never finish it, but thanks for writing it anyway, I really like it.
Thanks for writing and have an amazing day!

Plz find way to make kaneki a ghoul plz

I really hope you come back to this, it’s so good.

"How exactly is me adjusting how I look an issue?"

An 8 year old everyone.

Johoho,
i dont know if you are still reading this (im Kinda late to the Party), but whatever...
While i really enjoyed reading your Story, there are two Things i want to Point out:

First, numbers up to twelve are normally written as words(While "seven" doesnt really stand out, "7" Kinda Interrupts the Flow of reading in an unpleasant way).

Second, instand of writing Things Like "three feet" or "two inches", maybe try using more picture-esque (is that the right Word?) Things, Like "an Arms length" or "a Step away". Those are much easier to imagine and help building up the wanted Image in the Readers head with out having to imagine How much exactly an inch is. (it also geht's rid of the problem with some people (Like me) beeing used to different units.)

great story

PlZzxzxzzzzzzzzzzz make new cha

Please update! Need to know what happens!

I know every good story has to have conflict if it is to continue for a while and stay entertaining. I know this, but it doesn't stop me from yelling "FUCK YOU!" whenever the author of whatever story I'm reading deems it time to ruin the happy little world and shake up its residents. Im really wnjoying this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

Is kabuki gonna turn or not? Plz PM me about it. Nice update as always

This is an amazing story! Please update soon!