| Reviews for Going On |
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  dude chapter 1 . 5/28 bro this has potential but the constant switching between perspectives is hard to follow. Also, you shouldn't have a POV of two people simultaneously; it's just super confusing and hard to follow. Keep it third POV if you have to but don't over complicate it. I just want to lyk that this is constructive criticism only meant to help you improve. No hate at all, can't wait to see the improvement in your work! You're doing great :) |
 Bianca Wisteria chapter 16 . 11/19/2017 YAAS U HAVE 188 READERS WHO ALL SHARE THIS ACCOUNT! PLEASE CONTINUE! |
| WT4L chapter 16 . 8/25/2016 PLS write more |
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/11/2016 please update soon |
| Lightning2003 chapter 15 . 7/15/2015 AWESOME. I cannot believe it has such less favorites, follows and reviews. Its Reynico not Reyco. Why don't you do a chapter on the girls as well. And make Percy, Jason and Nico fight together with there magic glowing sword upgrade. I like the name of Nico's sword. Your story is amazing. One: It actually makes sense compared to other fanfictions. Two: You actually healed Nico and helped Leo. Three: I love bonding fanfictions. Four: Its not that romantic. (Not a fan of romance.) Five: It has action. Love it! Update faster! |
| ReinerBraun27 chapter 6 . 4/1/2015 XD Hazel... |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 7 . 2/8/2015 Wonderfully written. |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 6 . 2/8/2015 Fantastic chapter. |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 5 . 2/8/2015 I hope they go after Leo and Jason and rescue them. |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 4 . 2/8/2015 Terrific fanfiction. |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 3 . 2/8/2015 Wonderfully done. |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 2 . 2/8/2015 Poor Nico. :( |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 2/8/2015 Great chapter and fanfiction. :) |
| jzk chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 I love your story when I first read it I can image it easily so good luck with the remaining of the fanfiction story |
| Matt chapter 14 . 12/15/2014 Nice Fairy Tail cameo in this chapter. |
