Ha! That ending was hilarious. Loved the steamy goodness too.

Nice~!

This was amazing. So steamy!

The last part was funny! Oh how I love Itachi!

I... Love... This! Swear the ending had me laughing

What the...? They were still genin? Hahahaha!

Genin Sage Crew

woao thought sakura and sasuke was 13 but are 17 and genin lol * u * when itachi what I loved the lemon meciono

Nice one-shot! Would be interesting if you wrote more :)
Keep on writing!

I thought wow sasuke and saku were 13 * o * but do not have 17 / - / u me is amazed when itachi said they were genin - / - excellent lemon charm me * u *

Your writing style is one exquisite masterpiece! Really, the way you play with words is like out of this world! Now... don't let anyone to tell you differently because the phrases you create in your lemons (or other stories) are one of a kind. For not being a native English speaker you could easily best many native ones here. You clearly have an excellent vocabulary and I don't really understand why anyone would be bothered when the scene is described so vividly - well, I could say what I honestly think, but it would only came out as a rude comment about other people and that is not the thing I want to write into a review. ;)
Anyway... this is a one-shot with lemon it is meant to be about sex with no real plot and it meets exactly THIS expectations. I'm sure you are intelligent enough to realize this by yourself, but take it as an expression of my support. :) I mean you always can add some kind of a plot into it, but if it's not there it is your decision and nobody's else. The same goes with continuing these kind of stories. If it's not meant to have a sequel it simply won't... Everybody else deal with it! I think it's perfect the way it is and we should be grateful that this talented lady even shared her story with us. Or other equally (or even more) stunning works.
I'm sorry if I sound as an arrogant b*tch here... not really focusing on reviewing the story, but I just happened to stumble upon some other reviews and, honestly, they pissed me off. So here you go... Again, I apologize, your story was wonderful I was your secret admirer from the first time I've read your stories, because the sex there is breathtaking. And every man should just go and read it to have a clear instruction how to please a woman! :D Which is meant partly as a joke so don't throw your hates on me. ;)
Alright... that should be it. Thank you for the great experience again. ;)

The last part was the best.

Just think about a Sakura and Sasuke seventeen years old and still gennin was so funny.

*reads the ending* Rofl! That is too funny!

very cute... would be interesting if you continued this. At first I thought Sasuke and Sakura were still younger, maybe around 14/15 since you mentioned their old clothes... had no clue they were 17. And at the rate they're going Sakura would most likely be pregnant and retire as a genin before she would advance. lol

Poor Sasuke, he's lucky.