I like reading this story.

I would very much love it, if Jack Frost kept his waist-length hair.

I didn't finish this chapter but I totally agree...I mean we came so far in technology yet we don't have a game like SAO

Awesome!

fucking shit don't read

My son does nothing but read this from morning till night. Why?

Alright dude da hell man. First 2 chapters of complete nonsense why didn't you start the reaction earlier.

Can you please make another lime chapter

Make another chapter and have gohan wear different clothes

Make another lime chapter

I think you improved and I'm happy to see a new chapter!~~ :3 Thank you for updating!~

I love this story! I hope it keeps going!

Liked it

However i kept getting confused on who was talking/saying what at the start

Next time (if you're not going to change this) please can you put different speakers on different lines

Wow this is interesting. Love the plot and I totally understand what it's like to be unsatisfied with a story. It's frustrating so I can understand wanting to revise things. Anyway, I was just kinda hoping you'd put up an author's note on this story to tell us about its revision. Good luck on your novel tho and thanks for putting your work out there.

Thank you for taking the time to inform us all about this, and also for taking the time to create a story for us all to enjoy. I mean while It's nice that we all love the story you've been working so hard on, It's important that the author is satisfied with their creation as well.
P.S. We understand that you have a life and there will be times where you end up being too busy to work on this story, so you take all the time you need; All of your loyal readers will still be here for you no matter what.