| Reviews for The Love Rivals |
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   violet lilaccs chapter 1 . 7/26 awwww tht one line was rly sweet |
| JanaiLove chapter 1 . 5/16 This was too cute and very well written. I'm a sucker for NaLu fluff. I could just see Juvia and Natsu hunkered down at a table somewhere in the guild as she finally gets to share all of her love conspiracies. And i can picture Natsu's blank but focused look while she explains them to him lolololol. Also, i totally agree with your author's note. All of us, readers and fellow authors could do a better job of supporting eachother by leaving feedback. |
| WeirdInsomniac chapter 1 . 4/11 Natsu’s thoughts about "his love rivals" were hilarious. I had to laugh when Dan was given the name "Damn Strange". Natsu was not right but not wrong either xD Thank you so much for publishing this well written and cute OneShot. |
| cosmictrap chapter 1 . 12/28/2019 this was the cutest thing ever :') it's an angle i never thought of exploring and it somehow amuses me that natsu was influenced by juvia hueuhe i find that so funny. i'm wondering now about another story over that hehe... i really liked this! it's a fresh idea and even seemed kind of in-character! and you know what i agree with most? your author note. GO. OFF. |
| savwafair chapter 1 . 11/5/2019 thanks so much for sharing this with us! |
| zid95thanad chapter 1 . 10/14/2019 thanks so much for this story...really love it and so in characters... |
| 0309Soul chapter 1 . 4/21/2019 This is one of the most "realistic" ways of them getting together I've ever read, like I can easily picture this actually happening in the real series, you're amazing! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2019 Awe! |
| HSKSHJSHSKSH chapter 1 . 2/9/2019 Haha nice idea! Natsu being jealous and considering almost everyone who's a boy and somewhat close to Lucy after "provoked" by Juvia is just priceless XD This is probably one of the best funny NaLu oneshots out there. And I agree with you on that topic about reviews. I used to review rarely, but now I'm starting to review more, even though they're only short ones, and will review more after you opened my eyes :) Starting with this oneshot right here! Feedback matters, even though it's only a short one. You never know what it can do! |
| L.E.T.I.-77 chapter 1 . 2/9/2019 GRACIAS POR EL ONE-SHOT estubo precioso 3 Todavia no entiendo muy bien como funcionan las cosas aqui, pero me has enseñado algo importante, gracias por eso |
| albatrossnowflake chapter 1 . 12/27/2018 sweatdrop |
| kaylajmoss chapter 1 . 12/9/2018 I really enjoyed this one! great work! |
| SunBinamra chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 Hee hee, I wish Juvia and Natsu had interacted more in the manga, I think if they really got to know one another they'd be best friends. Great story! |
| Dsl chapter 1 . 3/15/2018 That was the most funniest but cutest fan fiction I've ever read! I love your story, thx for bringing this into my life! I law you one |
| Shiraneko-chan chapter 1 . 2/17/2018 Sweet3 |
