Wow. That was exceptional. I love this one.

I have no word to describe this. Scary and beautyful at the same time, well done.

This was just too beautiful. perfect

I think you need to add a warning at the top and change the rating to M. This is too violent and the ending too unexpected, even though no violence/sex is explicit.

Creepy, and dreamlike, and altogether wonderful. Nicely done. A terrific job of showing an amoral, truly alien creature in this Loki.

Your style fits the story well. There's an underlying sadness in all the writing, and it's powerful in its own right.

This story is so goddamn beautiful, you have no idea.