Wow~ amazing~~~~

Aw :'3
Great story bro, you did good ;)

it was amazing

Omg I have tears in my eyes, this was really good! Thank you for sharing!

This was beautiful!

The story is good, but since it has the copied lyrics of Kelly Clarkson's "Dark Side", it breaks the following part of the Content Guidelines:

Actions not allowed:
3. Copying from a previously published work (including musical lyrics) not in the public domain.

Please remove all of the copied lyrics from your story before someone can use them as evidence in their abuse reports.

And in case you're wondering when and why that rule is made, here is the background information. Back on April 27, 2005, the admins put this message on the front page regarding songfics:

In addition, [this site] would like to address a growing problem. For whatever reason, some writers feel it's okay to copy-n-paste musical lyrics they have not written into their fiction. If you did not write it, do not post it. This has always been our policy. Please remove these entries immediately to avoid account closure.

Keep in mind that "public domain" means something that has expired intellectual properties, like Shakespearean works. And disclaimers don't cut it for song lyrics. Not even changing a few words from the original song will be enough.

catspats31
Member of Eliminator

THAT was perfect! I just love how at some point in the story the song goes from being about Reborn to also being about Tsuna as well! It looks like they both had a hidden "dark side", alothough I'm a little surprised that Reborn didn't have very much of a reaction when Tsuna was revealed as part of the Vongola. Regardless though, the story was really well put together, Bianchi's involvement was a clever twist, and the layout of the story really helped contribute a lot to the atmosphere! Great job!

Brilliant :) loved it!