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Graipfruitboi chapter 21 . 7/28 I like the wheel of time quote, great job! |
Wolf957 chapter 78 . 11/26/2019 ...THIS... IS... AN AMAZING STORY! PLEASE, DO MORE NALU STORIES! If you're taking requests/suggestions, I got an idea for a Nalu (along with Gajevy/Gale): All the Male Dragon Slayers are going through heat (Dragon Mating Season) and are ready to mate. However, the Alpha of the group has to start it off before the others could (That being Laxus; all the Dragon Slayers formed a pact with each other, becoming a family group of their own from how few they are [Wendy is their baby/little sister, but is too young for Mating Season]). He starts off by scent-marking his mate (...Honestly, I think he and Mira make a cute couple), before he takes her to his den, while releasing a pheromone that the other males picked up and went to look for their mates (They find it to be the appropriate time to claim their mates and start families of their own [They want to become fathers and desire to have their mates pregnant with their babies/hatchlings.]). While the females, not Dragon Slayers, are effected by their mates' pheromones (lightheadedness, fever-like symptoms), which helps their bodies to relax and increase the chances at becoming pregnant. So, the males will keep mating/rutting with their mates, until they end up pregnant... And yes, the Male Dragon Slayers have knots. |
Sourcewalker chapter 78 . 8/6/2019 Wonderful story. I had a lot of fun through the journey. It has been finished for some time, therefore the information is outdated, but I hope that you find yourself in good health and with your passion for writing still burning strong. I appreaciate the work you put into the story and want to express my thanks for sharing this. It was awesome. I wish you the best. |
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 7/18/2019 Interesting chapter and plot and idea |
sakshishetty3003 chapter 76 . 7/9/2019 Hey great story here. But I still can't wait for the Platinum Keys. |
MysticChemyst chapter 34 . 1/26/2019 Freed is WAY too passive for Mira, she would stomp all over him when she gets headstrong. That's not a good foundation for a relationship. |
monsterakers chapter 73 . 7/27/2018 loved this chapter! It honestly made me cry a little when I found out that the baby was okay. |
monsterakers chapter 34 . 7/26/2018 "For the Love of Mavis wear some temperature related clothing" lol |
MorriganFae chapter 8 . 6/21/2018 The proposal was so good and I love the flame dragon ruby! I have read lots of mating stories but I like them, so it doesn’t bother me to have them as mates. My first one was Feel My Desire. It is crazy good if you’re looking for a mating fic. Sadly never finished though! I’m enjoying this story! The lemon was the perfect zest! |
delicateb4addie chapter 73 . 10/24/2017 Twooo chapters left TT omg thanks so much for this! |
delicateb4addie chapter 67 . 10/24/2017 Noooo third day and I'm already here! I'm too obsessed with NaLu! TT |
delicateb4addie chapter 62 . 10/23/2017 It's been 2 days and I'm already here. XD I love this sooooo much! X3 |
delicateb4addie chapter 60 . 10/23/2017 Haha I just realized that every time I search up any other FT ship, there's always NaLu XD THANK U SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS :D |
Mavis Vermillion chapter 13 . 10/20/2017 A little late... STING X YUKINO FOR LIFE but... NaLu is the best thank you sooo much for writing this! :D |
Mavis Vermillion chapter 5 . 10/20/2017 I love your story so far! Honestly, you should make a chp after the last three telling the audience that they should listen to "Dark Side" by Phoebe Ryan while reading this :) THANKS SO MUCJ |