Loved it! Keep going!

I love this! I can't wait until your next update.

I would like to see something about what Gajeel thought about seeing his mate down there as well. Or just what he's thinking about levy in general.

Glad I could help! ;) I was able to read this chapter easier, which, by the way, was awesome! I want to know what happens next! Keep up the good work, bye :)

Great first chap! Though one thing: you should separate the dialogue when two different people are talking. In some cases you did and in others the was a big paragraph with dialogue. Just saying :) Update soon!

It's really cool so far :D I can't wait to s3 what happens next!