Reviews for Fresh Start |
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Guest chapter 2 . 9/21/2018 Okay seriously you are having a seventeen year old Mike behave like a toddler ... even through a enchanment to age him since he was fourteen years old ... he wouldn't behave like a toddler at age seventeen. You should have just said that he was say ten ... that his grammy's enchanment made him hit all his growth spourts so he looked like a fully grown adult. That way when the enchament broke ... Mike would go back to being a ten year old boy ... and it wouldn't be such a reach with the way he's behaving. I mean unless Mike was mentally retarded he wouldn't be sucking his thumb as a seventeen year old teenager ... and he wouldn't be bursting into tears every single time someone honesty shows honest caring emotions towards him. I like the concept ... and I love the flow of the story ... I just can't get past that you have Mike at age seventeen and having behavior that a mere two year old toddler would be having. It simply doesn't fit Mike's character is all. |
zainabdiggie chapter 1 . 12/21/2017 Awww, that can't be the end pls update |
Random stranger chapter 2 . 12/3/2017 Please please please update soon, I love this story |
allfallingdown chapter 2 . 9/4/2015 I really like this story and would love to read more :) |
TOVE chapter 1 . 8/11/2015 Hey love this story and I hop you'll write another chapter. Just to point out that you spelled Harvey's last name wrong. I think it is Specter and not Spencer. Please countinue writing on this |
Asha17 chapter 2 . 5/4/2015 Hi, just read this and I loved it. It would be awesome if you could write another chapter. Great story! :) |
LolaWorld chapter 2 . 4/29/2015 I thought that was super sweet. LOVE SUITS and especially if it involves Harvey being a daddy. :) |
K chapter 2 . 4/22/2015 this is fantastic! I was very happy for this story and I really hope you continued with this story |
Nightingale1692 chapter 2 . 3/14/2015 You should consider continuing this story. It is really good, but it would be even better if there was more. |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/29/2014 I love the storie please write more |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2014 Aw they're so cute X3 |
Angusina chapter 2 . 10/20/2014 Very good. |
rubyblue100 chapter 2 . 10/19/2014 His lucky to be looked after:) |
MarnieWest chapter 1 . 10/5/2014 awesome! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014 I like it. Continue please. :) |