OMG this was hilarious and adorable at the same time and mirajane lol I love the way you wrote her as it was just hilarious

NALU!...BTW love the fanfic

I feel so bad for 9 year old Natsu

OMG! Kawaii! Awesome! Pizza!
No, seriously. This was a joy to read. Thank you so much.

Please note that your story is breaking the following part of the Content Guidelines:

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1. Entry title and summary must be rated K for all audience. No exceptions.

I suggest that you get rid of all of the words that aren't K-rated from the summary of your story.

Ehmagod! So... Frickin'... Cute!

i love it! really really cute and Mira is just hahahahhah soooo cute! anyway please continue this story. I want to know what happened to Mira. good job!

Cute. I think you got their personalities down pretty well.

I LOVE THIS!

Beautiful! Please continue

That was adorable! I totally ship NaLu! Nicely written.

Whaaa.. Its so sweet..

Wow I read your other reviews and people already want you to continue on even though this was published 9 hours ago! Gratz to you having that kind of fan base! :) First of all I love the concept! But I honestly feel like it needs some editing, some of the paragraphs seem rushed, and a lot of jumbled thoughts going on. I like the trick with the napkin, being a mom even I didn't know that one. I don't like backtracking moments personally, not a story line thing just a personal quirk of mine,but I wonder if in a future chapter you might go back to an instance that might have made Happy sick in the first place. I hope my review was equal parts good and constructive. I thought about offering to edit it myself but I'm too afraid of messing it up (nor would I know an easy way to do that).

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. so sweet! guys, guys, let author-san take her/his time. *giggles uncontrollably* do your best! we'll be waiting!

Hi I really wanna keep reading so please don't take a month to update the chapter like other stories I have read (not yours, other people's)

Thanks :)