Never saw that coming. Still think Jan/Peter is cuter.

I will call tseriousng lightly shocking but as soon as I heard the word cute I had known what would happen and I'm not bashing you on this but what about Jan being married to Phillip I know its a fanfiction and I shouldn't Take it that serious but my belief is if you write a fanfiction it needs to be set in the time after the original work of art I mean consider the fact this is too long before George Glass when you write about the Bradys make it about how things are going for Greg in College, Sam and Alice getting married something like I admire your subject choice and your writting

Far out as far as friendship stories go. Anyway, ever give thought to a crossover possibility? If not, well, here's an idea to think on; JAN & LUCY both attend their SENIOR PROM in '77, but JAN brings along a special surprise for her escort, in Marine Corps dress blues, namely GOMER PYLE!
I read about their first meeting up in G.L. PEABODY'S story that has the BRADYS honoring our nation's BICENTENNIAL. When it took place, GOMER was a full six-striped sergeant, and I think that JAN may have just kind of recently completed her junior year of high school. If you haven't read the Bicentennial story just yet, well, I recommend you keep it in mind for the present. Afterall, even a story that has JAN & LUCY both attending UNC at CHAPEL HILL would make for interesting reading as JAN studies extra-hard, resulting in her MASTERS DEGREES in both ELEMENTARY EDUCATION & AGRICULTURE. This too is just a thought, no more, no less. Besides, maybe if JAN was to marry GOMER, well, that would explain the agricultural degree partly.

this was really good

It was totally awesome!

You are amazing. I never ever would have thought someone would have a Brady bunch femslash story on here and you thankfully proved me wrong! And to top it off it was in character and written perfectly!

Kisses,

Kitten

Whoa! I love that story!

THIS IS SICK. SLASH WARNINGS NEED TO BE GIVEN ON THE SUMMAYR OF THE STORY SO DECENT PEOPLE KNOW TO STAY FAR FAR AWAY.

REPORTED FOR ABUSE AND MISRATING

You are a talented slash writer. I've read your review of my story on AFF. You're right: we do have different ideas on Lucy, but I like your characterization as well.

It's amazing how you managed to write a concept that would be considered anti Brady-Bunch but wrote it in such a way that it remained true to the spirit of the show. Bravo!

Okay, so I'm almost two and a half years late on this one; can you blame me? Who would think to go looking for Brady Bunch slash? xD You are so my hero. Bravo!

lol i love it! r&r mine even if you dont like harry potter just review cuz i like reviews! ty!

I thought "anything with the word 'slash' and 'brady bunch' in it must be good." You proved me right, girl. You proved me so right.

Very nice.

Really good. I love it, please continue.

I loved it ! You should write more Brady Bunch Femslash!