Sad

this is illegal delet now

awesome update soon

And so the couple lived in seclusion for the rest of their lives until they died. The End 3

Of all the oreimo fanfic I read this was my favourite

thx for the spoiler

Great story so far i hope to see more soon keep up the great work:)

Aww, too bad Ayase is a 'ho

This shit is weird as hell, but it still made me cum. :)

Nice story! So far pretty entertaining, nice chapter lenght so that one can read them pretty quick. Good job. :-)

First of all: Somebody for whom I'm kind of a beta reader told me about this fanfiction, so...I don't ship Kyosuke and Kirino, that's why I can't exactly say anything to the plot.
But I have to say that I really like your style of writing, it's really good, especially considering that it's your first fanfiction :) (And yeah, I know that this review is probably pointless for you if you want opinions about your plot, but I just thought you might appreciate a review, even if it's just about your writing style)