This was fabulous! I loved all of it!
This line SLAYED me "Some spells were just too fragile." It's so dreamy and beautiful, but has so much truth in it! Love!

Oh bless. Poor Jamsie.

Absolute perfection from start to finish! I loved this so much!

How much this is an one-shot, I'd to see the retaliation of James through either Sirius or Remus' perspective.

I really really enjoyed this, and think you should be proud of this little gem. Sirius's character was written perfectly and was very fun to read. I also found James hilarious; especially his surprise at learning that Sirius and Remus loved each other.

I hope you understand my overexcited babble about why this is a great oneshot, I'm not good at making sense after reading great wolfstar fluffiness. It's because of all the disorientation Remus and Sirius bring to me.

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A very endearing story. Thanks for sharing it. I had to smile in the end and I loved the little details you added in the description. Very heart warming in my eyes.

Awwwww. That was so freaking adorable. I could have stretched the 'aw' out for a couple of lines quite comfortably.

Some very sexy imagery throughout, hehehe. I love how you kept the humour without getting crude. Really suited the Marauders, and James' PoV in particular.

Absolutely loved the idea of Sirius keeping private about his and Remus' relationship, while making sure to embarrass James every chance he got XD

When James walked in on them just hugging, with their deep, undying, eternal love exuding from them like the blinding light of a quasar - ah! - I fell in love with them all over again. And then all the little gestures he noticed when they were back in the common room. So cute.

I also liked Lily's assumption that he was homophobic, and how she consequently froze him out.

Gorgeous work!

Loved, loved, loved this one! So fun and interesting to see how the different characters interect/react!

That became a lot deeper than I expected it to be... but really like it! It's nice to see James' viewpoint, you don't get that very often :)

Hahahahahaha! I love this so much! Thank you for writing this for me! Eeeep! First thing I loved, the description at the beginning. Remus and Sirius are so sexy, but not to poor James. Ahahaha! And then James knowing that Sirius was nearing his, ah, happy ending. Hehehehe. I love this more. Is it wrong that I like the idea of James knowing Sirius's intimate groans so well? Maybe. And Sirius trying to torture a scandalized James over and over with the help of an unknowing and caught-up-in-the-moment Remus? Yes yes yes. Remus is so innocent. :-P And Sirius is the best kind of troublemaker. Hehehe. And poor James then getting Lily on his bad side. :-P He just needs to embrace the man love. Hahahahaha! Love it.

But I think my favorite part was when James caught them being cute, and he was happy for them. *sighs* They're in love love love! And how he watched his two friends interact in public then, and saw the little things he had been missing before. And his and Lily's note passing. So cute. Sooooooo cute. So freakin' cute I might just burst. Death by cuteness. Aghhhhhh!

Thank you! And the writing in this was just so much fun to read, what flow woman! Mwuah mwuah mwuah mwuah mwuah! You get ALL the kisses.