I actually found this quiet funny. Gonna fav it!

This was absolutely hilarious! Pity you aren't writing anymore.

Hi, I know that this is from 2003, but I had to comment. I speak the Vulcan laguage somewhat fluently, and I can tell you that it does have a subjunctive. Its aitlu.

Thank you for a pleasant read.

And congratulations on getting published

I really am enjoying this...but..Mccoy is starting. to sound OOC and slightly Pathetic...

This was a great story! You had me laughing for a good couple minutes with the dialogue between Spock and McCoy.

Great. Even if I've only read to somewhere in the top of 2

loved this story! and i definitely laughed at the end when spock came in announcing that he did not bring whiskey. i was like wtf? ...oh! :)

congrats on being published! that's big-time!

pax

"Various other thoughts passed through McCoy's head, some of them perhaps an overflow from Spock's, as if these thoughts were going bar-hopping and left the first place because it was dull, and a bit square. 'Now, here's a good time,' they'd think, arriving at McCoy's."

bahaha. end of story. :)

pax

lmao i laughed for ~4 hours about spock being able to calculate time via facial hair.

i am absolutely loving this

reading on...

pax

lol quiet mauler

i can't wait to read the rest of this!

pax

You make a good point about McCoy. He's the kind of person, I think, who would need a core of really good friends. I always assumed we didn't see them because Kirk and Spock were really the main characters of TOS, but if they didn't exist, that would be a cause for concern.

The Sulu/Kirk exchange at the end was hilarious. And Scotty... it didn't occur to him to mention, maybe earlier, that the transporter wasn't working? I understand that the randomness is part of the humor, but seriously.

Everything is okay. *sighs* YAY. I loved this story. Spock and Bones constant bantering had me laughing and when it was serious, I was serious. Awesome job. :)

A Warsie? Sheesh, even Star Trek nicknames are better than Star Wars. Did I mention that I love this story? Whoops. Sorry about that. I love this story. One more chapter. *is kinda sad* But all good things must come to an end, no? Yeah.