| Reviews for The Black Apple |
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   Kage-Shino chapter 16 . 7/18 Did you die? |
| Kage-Shino chapter 14 . 7/18 url?sai&urlhttps%3A%2F% .com%2Fwiki%2FTeam_Tobirama&psigAOvVaw1PlSjcgMeoIZd4WhoykHzK&ust1595220956394000&sourceimages&cdvfe&ved0CAIQjRxqFwoTCOj5kbDD2OoCFQAAAAAdAAAAABAD I think it's just his casual clothes. |
| Kage-Shino chapter 12 . 7/18 *spits out water and blood* |
| Technically Shipper Trash chapter 16 . 7/10 This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. |
| KamiOfKamis chapter 16 . 5/24 Nice continuation! I thought you had given up on it, so it's nice to see. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/15 Nice fanfic. But stop butchering Hamura's name, please. It's Hamira, not Haruma |
| Ciel Moony chapter 16 . 5/2 Good stuff |
| Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 4 . 4/25 You typed it as Haruma like 6 times in those first few chapters. possibly more |
| Kitsune Obsessed Freak chapter 1 . 4/25 Who is haruma? You mean Hamura right? |
| Bitchpls chapter 16 . 4/17 Yo! When to expect the next update |
| Parselmaster chapter 2 . 3/8 This appears to be a bashfic. Those are exhausting to read. Seriously. I couldn't even get half-way through this chapter because of how blatant it is. When over half of a character's interaction with another character seems to be the result of a hate-fetish, there isn't any appeal to those who don't share it or can't ignore it. Current Review: Interesting and unique premise, but bogged down by odd and conflicting characterizations without explanation. |
| EllemenoB chapter 15 . 3/6 This story is now in my top ten. Please keep writing this. It's so damn good |
| MarkiexD chapter 16 . 2/23 Awesome story! Keep up the good work and as to your question, doesn’t Danzo have the elephant summons? |
| te.nellis chapter 16 . 2/7 Fantastic! Keep it up! |
| Iamfreakingout chapter 4 . 2/4 the feast of souls is upon us |
