I found this bc of tumblr. I love it so much! Best GaaSaku ever! :D

It's so freaking awesome!

That's perfect as it is. I devoured it.

This is so great. I love this story, and would love to see it drawn out into a full blown chapter story.

The lemon was so perfect! Omg! Ahhh! I cant stop thinking about about it! You are so amazing! Keep writing!

What could have gone very wrong went very right.
Congratulations! (:

Loving this. Strangely fitting.

omg! you should have made it into a multi-chaptered fic! sooo amazing!

MOOAAARRR!

Simply wonderful.

You have a way with words. Also, you've captured both GaaSaku perfectly - even AU. (I tend to shy away from AU, but this had drawn my attention.)

I forgot to review this. So here it is... You are a GODDESS! If this fanfic was any more perfect it would be REAL. Like canon. Like an OVA. Like little animated ideas in Kishimoto's head that he just HAS to breathe life into... Heaven.

That wasn't very helpful. Too much praise. But honest to god I can't think of anything more appropriate to say. XD

I agree with your decision. That choice made the story all the more interesting and fun *thumbs up in a Gai pose*

This was so damn beautiful. Well done.

Loved it. You did a really good job at writing this piece. :)

I can't breathe. that was so hot. so amazing! everything was so realistic. characterization. the dialogue. the fighting. that fucking lemon. yum! i can't love this enough. it's so perfection. thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!