PLZ START BACK AGAIN! IT'S SO GOOD!

Hi. I really enjoy reading this and I would love it if you continued it.

Ideas for if you come back to it:

You could trying to run away but fall over and give up. Ciel finds you when he was on his way to another murder and you stay with him until Chris finds you and kidnaps you. You are tortured. Sebastian and ciel find you, save you and you and ciel get married.

(You can tell I like writing/reading fan fictions.)

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Pleeeeease make more

Omg lol please I don't want to die please make more chapter 20 it's good

Are you gonna make more?

Please put the new chapter out! i love it so muchhhhhhh. *violently fangirling* Fuck the grammar po po. FUCK THE FEDS

is page 18 the last chapter of this loving this story so much

OMG ARE THEY GOING TO GET MARRIED OMFG I F***ING HATE CHRIS THAT BASTARD btw isn't 13 a young age to get married?

I love how Ciel is all jealous and stuff it's so romantic
(Btw It's me, the 14 year old with the 10 points) I just wanted to tell that I love your fanfic you're doing great i love it

A have a few points to mention:
1-Ciel's personality doesn't resemble his real personality at all. You know, Ciel's not really the type of person to admit that he's so lonely and it just doesn't feel right to me that Ciel sleeps next to the reader on the first day they meat and that kiss was a little bit rushed.
2-Isn't the queen a young girl and wouldn't it be odd to hide her face to her own daughter? (Or perhaps the story you've written happens before the death of the king...) Anyways why would the queen send the reader to CIEL and not to some private teacher or something? But aren't princesses taught how to act like a proper lady since childhood?
3-How did the queen know about Ciel's demonic contract with Sebastian and I think Ciel would be the type of person who will try to denying it...
4-Even if the reader was boyish, at that time ALL women wore dresses and ONLY a pair of special shorts when horse back riding. (Well I just think the reader wears too many shorts, that's all)
5-It just feels wrong to me that demons would have siblings (in this case Sebastian and Selia).
6-I suppose it would be better if you would have mentioned HOW the reader has summoned Selia.
7-Why was Lizzy crying when Ciel and her broke up? And instead of the word 'cheating' I think it would be better if you would have said 'secretly meeting', it would be more convenient for 13 year olds.
8-You could have invented another character instead of Alois Trancy... And they (Lizzy and Ciel) can't just break up like that, they have to go through an adult's opinion.
9-Watch out for grammar and spelling mistakes, please.
10-One little hint: use commas, it helps.
Well that's all I had to say! Thank you for your time and REMEMBER, I'm just a 14 year old girl giving her PERSONAL opinion ;) .

Dude, Selia, where were you when I needed you most? I was all falling off the balcony and you were just making some Ginger Root Tea, it wasn't even the darn tea I liked anyway. Gosh. *Dramatic Huff*
You said your brother was Sebastian, SEBASTIAN. But, But.. You were probably texting my mom (in the 1800's, yes,) that I was soo dead. But, But, But, But why?! You could of saved me Selia.

#NotOneHellOfAMaid

Letting me down bro, letting me down slowly.

(This comment makes no sense and has no value, but please update. I saw this in hope that this doesn't pressure or annoy you; but this is a good Ciel x Reader fanfiction in my opinion.

Thanks for reading this rather long comment with little to none critique or common sense, thanks!

~Girl who reads Fanfiction!

IMMMA KIIILLL UUUU CHRIIISSSS! (LOL) no I'm not...awesome story, but upppppdddaaattteeee! Please!

When u gonna update again! Plz let ciel and reader chan finally be in love too! We srsy need that

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I'M FANGIRLING RIGHT NOW!