Reviews for It Would Only End Badly
IG AiresBerries chapter 3 . 9/30/2018
This is absolutely amazing, let the writing gods bless you.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/28/2018
Okay listen. I know this ended in 2015 and you probably don't read the reviews anymore but for the love of God listen. I only came here cos I was promised Belson/Clarence in the description and I am on a MISSION to read every fanfiction that has my favorite character Belson in it. I planned on just skimming it but this caught my attention from the get-go! I'm not even a fan of Jeff/Sumo but I stuck around until the end. But the REAL REASON I'm writing this is this: oh my god do you REALISE how funny that mall scene was. When Clarence was doing his french fry walrus impersonation and Belson was trying not to laugh. And then they left and Jeff was afraid that they were leaving to go do something heinous. I just...I...The Sheer IMPLICATION that Clarence's French Fry Walrus Impersonation was SO FUNNY that Belson just BUCKLED like "listen man. Clarence. That was the funniest goddamn thing that I have ever seen in my life. I've been avoiding you for years but now I'm asking you to please take my body. We have to go do this now. Leave the fries in" like WHAT! It made me LOSE MY MIND I haven't LAUGHED SO HARD in MONTHS. It's been a full 24 hours and I have NOT stopped thinking about it and I am NOT over it. I laughed SO HARD YESTERDAY that my stomach just HURT and I literally could NOT sleep cos I kept REMEMBERING IT. I DON'T know why it was so funny to me but I just COULDN'T HANDLE IT. It BLEW MY MIND frankly it's just so HILARIOUS and ABSURD and I wanted it to happen for real SO BAD because it's just the funniest thing I have ever seen...I mean I'm sorry I'm so sorry to remind you of a story you wrote in 2014-2015 before a lot of the episodes were out, you're probably embarrassed about this story nowadays cos that's how authors are, but PLEASE UNDERSTAND that you Made My Day. School's starting soon so I REALLY needed a pick-me-up. With God as my witness THANK YOU SO MUCH for this. Just ...the SHEER IMPLICATIONS of that scene...goddamnit...anyway THANKS and the rest of the story was really good too. Even though it was all the way back in 2014, you still had the characterization of the dialogue DOWN TO A POINT and I read it all in their voices. Some of the facts don't hold up the best anymore obviously bc more episodes have been released (i.e. Jeff has since learned how to let loose a little, Belson had more character development and his house is shown more, etc.) but other than that (and thats not even that noticable) this story aged really well! genuinely took me by surprise. I loved your Belson too, loved seeing him happy for once. Also? All of my perceptions of an aged-up Clarence involved him being totally in the dark about anything remotely sexual cos he's too Pure I guess but I never considered your ideas, in which he actually takes all of that stuff in with a stride and it's not a big deal and is a little bit sassy even cos he's like that, is actually totally in character and funny as well! Never occurred to me but I love it now, what a fun dude that clarence is...anyway THANKS FOR READING ALL OF THIS and NO I WON'T ever forget that WALRUS FRENCH FRY THING...bye and THANKS I love you xoxox
Guest chapter 11 . 6/21/2018
Omg this was wonderful! Can u make a one shot/epilogue where clarence, belson, sumo, and jeff all go on a double date? Pleaseee that will make my life COMPLETE
Katy Beilschmidt chapter 5 . 11/7/2016
Yaaaay!
tundervolt chapter 11 . 2/9/2016
I don't really know what to say besides thanks a lot for this fic !
It was so amazing !
Kuromona chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
Make a sequel
Kuromona chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
Make a sequel
CarnivalGhost chapter 11 . 9/25/2015
So cute... :')

Thanks for writing it!
CarnivalGhost chapter 2 . 9/24/2015
Zomg, this is so cute. x.x

I'm only on chapter two, but I'M SERIOUSLY HOPING YOU KEEP UPDATING THIS.

I love how you have all of the characters' voices down so well - I'm sure it isn't easy coming up with Clarence's (and even Jeff's) lines, but you do it fantastically. :)

(Just don't forget to keep adding the lines for time jumps, or the the reading can get a bit confusing at times).
meme chapter 11 . 9/7/2015
Wow man i really liked your fic! I loved the fact that Jeff didnt want to be in a relationship at first but then it was all fluffy and made me feel so good,, thank u sm for writing it omg
Angiie Autopsy chapter 11 . 8/27/2015
I love this so much! I'm sad that it's over but glad that it was such a cute story. I do hope to read more from you in the future, thanks for writing this! 3
Ommuc chapter 11 . 8/26/2015
THIS WAS SO CUTE I CRIED A LIL AND SMILED SO MUCH
Princesscarebear chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
Lol I didn't know it was complete I was halve a sleep when I wrote my last review anyway I have to say thank you for writing this and I hope you write more Clarence fanfics in the future and I will be waiting :)
RichHoboM3 chapter 11 . 8/26/2015
I loved this story, it's such a masterpiece! I wish you good luck on writing the straight story, and a thank you for writing this beautiful story all the way to the ending.
Princesscarebear chapter 11 . 8/25/2015
Update soon this chapter as good
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