This is such a great story. Fantastic character development and realistic plot line. Shame it’s not finished.

Found this story again after reading it years ago.. Loved it then and love it now. Would love to see more of it some day.. Fantastic work.

- Madmelma

Really enjoying this story, would love to see more at some point, but understand if you are too swamped.

Enjoying this, hope there will be more, looks to be a long tale

Wow.
For a start, I love the way you write and the ability to immerse the reader within the story to the point where it feels as though you're actually there.
I also loved how the boys were wrestling their duties to IR with the want to have what would be normal for anybody else - I actually felt that there was a message, plus it's nice to see them not being portrayed as perfect.

Love this story, really want to know if Virgil and Scott will get together with Elizabeth and Tally permanently. Please, please finish this.

Oh I loved that bit with Tally seeing Grandma talking to the nurse, I just wanted to laugh in Tally's face as she didn't know who it was! :D
But then she still managed to get a picture of Alan.. Hmm she's smarter than I gave her credit for, this girls gonna be one heck of a nuisance! :L

Noooooo! Tally going behind their backs?! She did such great job at the rescue and now she's going to repay them like this? I hope she has a change of heart!

And I completely forgot The Hood was still in TB1... *shakes head in shame*
But boy did you do that scene brilliantly! Scott is so in control and so in character, you are such a fantastic writer!
I was biting my knuckles when he nose-dived, then relieved when the Hood disappeared but then you went and made poor Scotty crash! Oh my word wow.

But that now means Virg and Gords have to help two injured brothers…you are a meanie!
Still love this story though :D

""Why…does everyone…keep asking…that…?" Alan managed between short, panting breaths. "I didn't…get hit…in the ears…"" That line made me laugh out loud despite his injuries, bless him. He has a point though, he got hit in the chest not his ears hahaha!

What a fantastic rescue, you coordinated this magnificently! I had no doubt that Scott's plan would work, he is a very quick thinker. I am a bit bummed you let Alan get hurt but then again it really made it so tense! But Scott saved him so yeyy! :D

Oh my, I was on the edge of my seat thinking about poor Gords in Thunderbird 4!
I wonder what Scott's plan is.. after that improvisation (and yet incredibly skilful) of a landing in those conditions it could be anything! Oh dear, what's the Hood up to.. not good!
This is brilliant, I love it! :D

Wow, what an amazing first chapter! This is gonna be one intense ride! :D

Love this story. Lost count of how many times i have read it :-)

wow. Loved reading this story! so good. Feel sorry for Virgil and Scott though. Bless them.

Ow, come on finish this please !