GOSH this wrecks me every time I read it! So good.

Absolutely loved this!

Wow i can't this is 1000000/10

I loved this!

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OH MY STORMING KAGUYA THAT WAS AWESOME! You are a most excellant writer, one of the best in F !

This is so well-written️ I love how you showed the emotions of each character, Kakashi most especially, and Sasuke! That dull eyes and lone tear was what I expected as well Even Hagoromo’s input about Sakura’s ability to dispel the rinnegan genjutsu was a great addition to emphasize the strength of her power and love! Great job on pulling our heartstrings and weaving them words, author-san!️

Damn these.. bloody ninjas.. cutting onions like this *sob* *sob* ... I was so scared you really let Sakura die.. dammit..

I’m sobbing right now, this is emotional indeed TwT First, Kakashi’s pride and confidence in Sakura is very touching, I also felt my heart break at the guilt he is burdened with towards the three of them. And then, Sakura’s sacrifice… I lack of vocabulary in English to express how much her act of true love, for both of them, seems to be enshrouned in a beautiful, sad, even cruel light.
All along the war, I had the odd impression that Kishimoto-sensei did not give Sakura enough credit, because as far as I am concerned, she is a crucial element of the team 7, this is not all about Sasuke and Naruto’s bond, and her intervention in your scenario sounds deeply right. You had a great idea to use the Yin and Yang seal in Naruto and Sasuke’s palms.
And by the way, I love the title (as a fanatical Latinist student, it merely intensifies the feels)
Thank you for sharing, thank you so much !

Wow, that was fantastic!
I especially admire how you manage to present Sakura's train of thoughts when she was placed under genjutsu. How you made her feelings and memories fit in those few seconds between Sasuke's "you're annoying " and her death. There was so much of it there and it was all so well connected. Also, the mechanism of breaking the genjutsu was a great idea.

Another thing I really liked was description of Sasuke loosing his resolve during the fight. I could never really buy that he would just convert to Naruto's ideals. So how you wrote it - that he is doubting in himself and his choices - makes whole lot of sense.

And of course the description of final clash! And the parallel to the rooftop clash from part one! Awesome! Especially Sasuke's dread when he already know he will hit her and cannot stop.

Also, interesting idea with how the yin and yang seals were making it difficult for Naruto and Sasuke to hold their hands together.
With the resurrection of Sakura - from one side I really don't know how would it work ( I don't think sage's power was meant to do such things) but on the other hand I'm glad you wrote it the way you did because the alternative would have been too tragic.

Really deep. Good read! Favored you as an author a long time ago and now going back through. Realizing why :)

Dios mío. Ojalá pudieras entender mi español, porque en este momento no tengo cabeza para traducir lo que siento al ingles. Magnífico. Entre en pánico por un momento, ya venía directo a maldecirte, pero luego se hizo La Luz y todo estuvo bien otra vez, gracias, infinitamente gracias.

so in character, i hope you keep writing for this ship.

When the genjutsu became a reality I was so horrified and heart broken I almost stopped reading. I'm glad I didn't. I'm so relieved that there was a happy ending!
Another great fic! This is the third review I leave today so I hope you're not annoyed by now. I'm really loving your writing. :)

Nice